Your phrases landed on the floor
between us. I didn’t know how to catch them.
Strings of words, a story of near miss.
One collection of minutes that almost
restructured my life, like petals
blown away by the wind
never again to unite in beauty.
A reminder of the impermanence of us.
© Alicia Grimshaw 2017
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
This is beautiful, Ali. I see how it is a favorite poem. You are so talented and have a loving presence I so appreciate! Good to reconnect with you. 🙂
Blessings,
Debbie
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Debbie. We share a common commitment to bringing love to the planet.
LikeLike
Beautiful. 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Cee.
LikeLike
Beautiful pic! Good choice for the challenge
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the compliment.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This was very moving. Resonates. Love how time is a character in this piece.
I really enjoy your work. Nicely done.
LikeLike
Thank you Mel. I appreciate your positive feedback.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This one I will keep and reread when certain memories resurface … of a day a month back when sudden words just about restructured my life. (And I’d thought my experience unique!) Thank you for this beautiful level-set.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Jazz, I greatly appreciate your reflection. We are all seeking connection and it makes me smile to give the gift of my words to you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the first two lines…what an eloquent way to express the tragedy of a failure in communication!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Ann. I appreciate your feedback. Make it a great day.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully structured Ali.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Miriam.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful poem, and totally intrigued by your line “One collection of minutes that almost restructured my life”,
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for letting me know what resonated with you.
LikeLike
Your phrases landed on the floor
between us.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Kirsten.
LikeLike