One day I finally knew that I could swim
in the blue of the sky.
That I was as strong as I declared myself to be.
That my fears were teachers made just for me.
That there would always be cracks to slip through
times of trembling, shaken awake to fall again.
Then I stood next to the lake,
a mirror of blue sky wholeness,
arms wide with acceptance
I, the problem and solution
dove into a
reflection of release.
© Alicia Grimshaw 2017
Take in Varenna, Italy 2016
This is so beautifully penned down Alicia.
Writing is an art. And you for sure master it.
Loved it ❤
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Thank you Tajwar for your kind response. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this poem.
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Still catching my breath from this…
Both your prose and the beautiful mountain scape!
Lovely.
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Glad you enjoyed it Mel.
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Beautiful image, and beautiful poem again, Ali. ‘I, the problem and solution’ This is my favourite line. It reminds me of change and transformation – that we can be two different things depending on what we choose. There is so much potential within us if we just take the plunge sometimes. Hope you are doing well and take care ❤
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Mabel, your thoughtful response always arrives just when I need a boost in my day. I love hearing about your favorite line. Thank you my friend. I hope that you continue to find beauty in your day.
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I hope things pick up and you have a good week. Your poetry is always filled with life, and always so effortless. I admire your work a lot. Take care 🙂
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Mabel, I so appreciate your response. Make it a great day.
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Great poem!! I can see it in my mind.
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Thank you.
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On reflection, I find diving into the deep blue sea, totally cleansing and rejuvenating, and where my soul wants to be.
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Agreed. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful imagery – loved this.
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I appreciate this comment. Make it a great day.
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my fears were teachers made just for me….
I, the problem and solution
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Kirsten, thank you for your reflection. Sending you love and strength for this day.
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