I hear it. February 5, 2018 ~ Ali Grimshaw among the fallen plaster disrepair, wrinkles of error some may think irredeemable not broken beyond salvage surrendered in thick layers your heart lies beating. I hear it. © Ali Grimshaw 2018 Send a poem to your friends.Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)MoreClick to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Like Loading...
knowing how to listen is very important… congratulations to your post! best regards LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Yes, I think there are so many seeking to be hear. We need more listeners. Thanks. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Did you use the picture as a prompt, or did you write the poem first, whatever, there’s so much depth to your words and thoughts. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Thank you Ivor. I did use the photo as my inspiration for this poem. I don’t usually do this but it worked this time. LikeLike Reply
Not usually, but sometimes. This photo was taken in Venice and I did use it as a starting point for this poem. Thanks for asking Louise. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
lovely words.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful, Ali! I have a soft spot for old buildings. This speaks to me.
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Glad it brought joy to your day. Thanks for reading.
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That’s the best
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Thanks Sheldon.
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I hear it.
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This is especially poignant to me today, thank you!
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I am so glad. Thanks for letting me know.
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knowing how to listen is very important…
congratulations to your post!
best regards
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Thank you for taking the time to comment.
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To be heard. Who doesn’t want the beat of their heart heard? Beautiful.
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Yes, I think there are so many seeking to be hear. We need more listeners. Thanks.
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Did you use the picture as a prompt, or did you write the poem first, whatever, there’s so much depth to your words and thoughts.
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Thank you Ivor. I did use the photo as my inspiration for this poem. I don’t usually do this but it worked this time.
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Well done 😊
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I appreciate this coming from a fellow poet
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Hi Ali, Is the image always the starting point for your poems? Louise
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Not usually, but sometimes. This photo was taken in Venice and I did use it as a starting point for this poem. Thanks for asking Louise.
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Nice and simple words so well penned.
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Thank you so much.
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Welcome
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Good on so many levels
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Thank you. I appreciate your response.
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