Locked up, but not away
cherished in a closed loop.
Desire for the everlasting
secured with full disclosure
of our imperfections. Rusty
raw, real acceptance.
The very charged electrical
zing between our eyes that
speak across the loud crowd
like a room gone silent just for us.
Our eyes say, we are forever.
© Ali Grimshaw 2018
Photo take in Vernazza, Italy – Beloved
Beautifully written.. so much depth in each lines! 🙂
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Thank you Anne. I am so glad to hear you enjoyed it.
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Indeed I did.. You are most welcome! 🙂
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Complete understanding and acceptance of another.
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Thank you. The best of love is exactly that.
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Our eyes say, we are forever.
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Thanks Kirsten. Make it a great day.
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Lovely.
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Thank you.
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Rusty raw, real acceptance. That feels like a truth of relationship.
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Agreed.
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“Locked up, but not away”
So safe instead of discarded. I love it!
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Kayla Ann, thanks for the reflection. Much appreciated.
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