Do your eyes remain dry
cried out from
tears for the one
and one
and one
another one
and years of the countless
ones?
Those ones that were the most precious one
to someone.
My heart beats in you this day as tears run down my face.
Grief’s hand must change
what hope will never be able to.
Before all eyes have run dry.
– Ali Grimshaw 2018
Words are inadequate after another US school shooting. Still I try in the honor of those who fight for change and the grief that countless others must bare.
You poured out feelings
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Thanks for noticing. I did.
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Hi Ali, Im afraid too many eyes have run dry. The despondency not only in reaction to tragedies, but also of young people the world round growing up amidst violence to the will and brutal treatment of one creature upon another, is startling. It’s from a nightmare and we’ve forgotten how to wake ourselves up.
(And thank you for your comment on my blog.)
-Amaya
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Amaya, I relate to your feelings of despair. But the youth of our country are speaking out and taking action. You are awake and you can awaken others. We cannot give up.
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Thank you for your words.
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Thank you for letting me know they matter to your day.
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Beautiful poem, very well said. I just can’t wrap my head around the violence of these mass shootings. Your words are perfect!
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It is a heart wrenching topic but I feel that we must continue to reflect on this type of tragedy that keeps happening. Thank you for letting me know that my poem touched you.
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You’re very welcome! And true, we must reflect on it, something must be done. I have no idea what, but it’s just so sad. xx
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Beautiful words for yet another terrible tragedy. 🌼
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May we find a way forward in peace.
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Thank you so much for sharing this, Ali. ❤ Much love and Light to all. ❤
Blessings,
Debbie
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Debbie, your forgiveness work is an essential part of moving toward conversations that can change our current reality. Thank you for your actions. Have a beautiful day.
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Oh Ali, thank you!! This really touches me. Have a blessed week, and much love 🙂 Debbie
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I think your words have honored it very well! I understand and agree with the need for action, but I admit I am getting a bit tired of all those who are saying that words are totally useless. I don’t believe that we have to abandon words of comfort and understanding in order to have action. It’s not a choice we have to make. Words will always matter, and I appreciate yours on this subject. Thanks!
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Ann, thank you for your thoughtful reflection. The intention of my poem was to honor those in grief and to create a conversation that connects us instead of separates us.
I agree that words always matter and we don’t have to settle for either, or thinking. Authentic expressions of love can never be wrong. Take care today.
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Sadly but poignantly said.
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Thank you it’s always challenging to talk about the hard stuff
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It really is.
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tears for the one
and one
and one
another one
and years of the countless
ones
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Thank you Kirsten.
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Yes it has and as one who lives in the US there is nothing that terrifies me more than fearing that someday it will be my innocent loved ones that get destroyed by this violence!
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The laws must be changed. It’s up to each of us to speak out on this issue.
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Poignant!!
It truly is such a horrible thing and my heart is breaking.
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Yes, it is horrific. And it’s happened so many times in the US
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So poignantly worded Ali.
” How many rivers of tears must we cry.
Before all the deepest wells run dry”
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Ivor, what a beautiful response. Thank you for this.
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You’re right Ali, words are never enough but we can still unite in love and empathy for those lives lost 💜🙏
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Thank you for your loving response.
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True words of Tears, Ali and they are so beautifully written by you. Awesome poem.
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Thank you so much. It is struggle to put these feelings into words.
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Yes absolutely can understand Ali.
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