My poem, The Answers, is up on The Drabble today. It is a reflection from young adulthood and the power of finding your own answers. I am grateful to have my voice shared on another site. The Drabble is a favorite of my mine.
By Ali Grimshaw
They call me adult.
I have learned to apologize, drive a car
mastered spell check to avoid embarrassment.
Yet my days of fevered creation
and re-imagining myself, remain inadequate.
Knowing I know less with each ring of curiosity around my trunk.
Like paint peeling off an old house I am more than one color.
I live as a revolving door to exit and enter,
each time with a different view.
Growing up I believed adults lived in sureness.
Shocked disappointment crashed down
when the truth broke through
with no answers in its hands for me.
Why didn’t mom tell me?
Good writing Ali! 😊
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Thank you. Happy Sunday.
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I love this poem and the metaphors you use are very beautiful! I think my kids are very certain in their world than most of us adults are …
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Age can bring a far different perspective. Thank you for the positive response. Have a beautiful week.
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Oh now this is FABULOUS! Ali, I absolutely adore this poem and can completely relate.
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Your comment made my day. Thanks for taking the time to respond. Have a most excellent Monday.
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You as well my friend!
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Really raw and real. Thank you Ali. I volunteer for an org that serves homeless teens – and one of my favorite things is to support them in accessible all that’s possible with their creativity.
Have a wonderful week.
Blessings, Debbie
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Debbie, those teenagers are so lucky to have you. I have no doubt you listen with love and that is such an important gift to give them. Thanks for visiting. Have a lovely week.
Ali
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This is so good, Ali! I also used to think that adults lived in security, knowing exactly who they were and what they wanted to do. It really was a shock when I discovered differently… And congrats on getting posted on another site!
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Thanks Ann. I am smiling after reading your comment. It is always satisfying to hear when my writing resonates for someone else.
Have a fabulous Sunday.
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Knowing I know less with each ring of curiosity around my trunk.
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Kirsten, thank you for your reflection. I always appreciate hearing your thoughts. Have an awesome Sunday.
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