They called her crazy
an attempt to freeze her with jeers
never understanding
that she chose
to avoid too much comfort.
Empathy would always
be her closest friend
arm in arm, they would
walk in sandals through
November frost.
Warmed by desire
for connection.
A step toward those
who had no shoes.
© Ali Grimshaw 2018
Debbie,
Thank you for sharing my voice.
Keep shining your light.
Ali
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Debbie, thank you for sharing. May the spirit of empathy create loving connection in your day.
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Ali, this is incredible. What I take from this is how courageous it is to live every day in the truth inside, and the incredible power of empathy for those who do not understand. And there’s so much more. Funny, I wrote a blog today on the challenges of being a teenager. This is such a time of learning who we are and what’s truly aligned for us. I love this & and am honored to share it for #ForgivingFridays. Will do shortly!
Debbie
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Debbie, thanks for your reflection and for sharing this poem. I thought you might like this one. Sending you love and joy.
Ali
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Once again, you managed to say so much with just a few well-chosen words. Empathy, indeed.
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Thank you Ann. I appreciate your feedback greatly.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks for sharing.
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You are so welcome!! Love sharing great writing with followers!
xoxoxo
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Such a beautiful, insightful and inspiring poem, Ali!! Masterfully crafted! A wonderful read!
xoxoxo
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Thank you for your kind response. I am always thrilled to hear that I have inspired someone with my words.
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Yes, that is such a sweet experience to be sure, but even sweeter still is when your words inspire another to write from a seed of inspiration you left for them!!! Hope your week is going well!
xoxoxo
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A poignant, thought provoking piece.
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I appreciate your thoughtful compliment. Thank you Magarisa.
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You’re welcome, Ali.
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Empathy, a much-needed trait in today’s human. Very well written.
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Thank you Megha. I appreciate your support.
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My pleasure Ali
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Part of this I already dealt with as a teen, not that I avoided comfort, it was just not in my dictionary:) My voice has always been to strong to give in to what others wanted me to be, but it pains me when it is done to others who don’t know how to find the courage.
Hey, how did you find me? (Am glad you did:):))
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Thanks for stopping by and sharing your personal connection. It is always interesting to hear what someone’s experience brings to the reading of a poem.
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I love photography and that is how I found your blog. I enjoyed your photos.
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Ali, this is a beautiful image.
Typed with 2 thumbs rather than 10 fingers. Plaese excuse any tpyos 😳.
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Your response means so much. Thank you.
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never understanding
that she chose
to avoid too much comfort
these lines mean so much deeply, comfort as the only goal limits all human expressions to self and others. Loved the entire poem, it is powerful.
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Thank you for your reflection and for the compliment. I always hope to inspire others with my poems.
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A lovely voice of inspiration.
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Thank you Colleen. I appreciate hearing from you. Keep your light on.💜
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Doing my best Ali! ❤
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Lovely poem Ali.
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The words came from love and I hope they will inspire others to reach out in love
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Wonderful!
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Powerful post!
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Thank you. I hope it inspires.
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A step toward those
who had no shoes.
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Thank you Kirsten, for shining your light and reflecting the light of others. May love touch your day.
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