Life emerged from one egg
unexpected, now expecting
broken hearted or leap into life shared
anything in exchange for relief
from this current mind cloud
and a diagram to life’s answers.
Hold my hand and then
we will both know
a chance together forward.
© Ali Grimshaw 2019
To change together has to be the best way to live (and love)
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Agreed. Thanks for your reflection.
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a chance together forward.
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Thank you Kirsten I like that line too
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Beautiful! ❤️ I am right there along with you 🙂
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Thank you for your response.
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I like the hopeful ending: a chance together forward.
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Thanks for sharing your reflection Grace. I guess I like hopeful endings.
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Lovely poem Ali. Together we rise.
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I think that it is by design that we need each other. Have a great day.
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Probably, but it took me a long time to acknowledge!
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Those “unexpected now expecting” moments are sometimes the best!
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So true Laurie. Sometimes life grants us blessings in ways we never thought could happen.
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I love the tumble of hope these words strung together bring:
“a chance together forward”
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Thanks for letting me know which lines spoke to you. I always appreciate hearing that from others.
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Nice lines: “from this current mind cloud
and a diagram to life’s answers.”
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Thank You for the reflection, Frank. Much appreciated.
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