What if I wrote what could not be asked
the inappropriate bold words, or a question
that made you cringe slightly with wonder.
Left it on your desk, scented paper
inside an envelope that you would need to choose
to open or not, wondering who it could be from
unmarked, with just your cursive name penned upon
the front. Leaving you to hesitate with the thrill
of good or bad news to come.
© Ali Grimshaw 2019
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Awesome post, Ali!! Loved the secretive nature of the unknown note/letter with the hint of a romantic/sensuous nature!! Bellissimo, My Dear Bellissimo!!
xoxo 😊🌹💖
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Thank you. It is interesting how many readers have been drawn to this poem because of the mystery. I guess that is part of human nature. I appreciate your compliments as always.
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You are so very welcome! Your words were masterfully penned, Ali! No surprised they lured people in with if the way they whispered to me is any indication of others response too.
xoxo
Chuck
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They say that curiosity killed the cat… but I would certainly be feline for such a fine letter…
but then would you fear my answer to your bold question?
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I never fear any truthful answer. Thanks for stopping by.
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Thanks for sharing this fine piece! Excellent write. Love the image! Watercolor? See you in a couple weeks Ali, when dVerse returns. In honor of Solli Raphael: A Smidgen of Thought
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Great to hear that you liked this one. This is a photograph I took in Seattle, Washington and altered to look like a painting.
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Oh yes the possibilities are endless!! ❤️ Gorgeous writing, Ali 😀
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I am thrilled to hear this resonated with you. Thanks for letting me know.
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I love the anticipation of this poem and the daring of the writer. Nice!
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Thank you Sarah. I appreciate your feedback. Good luck with your new poetry book. I really enjoy reading your poetry.
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The feeling of mystery you create is beautiful 🙂
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You always leave the nicest comments for me. Thank you. Have a beautiful day.
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…the inappropriate bold words, or a question
that made you cringe slightly with wonder.
Leaving you to hesitate with the thrill
of good or bad news to come.
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Kirsten, thank you for your reflection. I always am fascinated by what resonates with you. Take good care.
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Ooh this is so tantalising. Love it Ali.
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Thanks Miriam. I always appreciate hearing from you.
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Thanks Ali. I feel the same way.
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I think curiosity would get the better of the person whose name is on the envelope. I know it would me. Great poem, Ali!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thanks for letting me know you liked it.
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Very intriguing Ali. I wonder what was written?
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It is the wonder of a story that feeds curiosity. I’m glad I pulled you in. I miss the days of reading and writing letters. It is a different experience.
Make it a great day.
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So many possibilities! Nicely done.
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Thank you for the kind feedback. Make it a great day.
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My pleasure.
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Intriguing 😎
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Thanks Val. Have a beautiful day.
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Love the sense of anticipation this poem engenders!
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I’m glad to hear it pulled you in. Have a beautiful day.
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Ali, this feels like a story. Though it leaves much to the imagination, it’s a story unfolding. No matter the decision made regarding that envelope. There’s a story.
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Moments of decision are fascinating aren’t they? Thanks for the feedback colleen.
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ah, what will he/she choose to do?
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Once opened but it’s impossible to put it back.
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Pandora’s box
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made me wonder too!
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Wonder is one of my favorite parts of being alive.
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Oh !! the mysteries we perceive in the unopened words….
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Great to hear from you, Ivor.
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I’m slowly getting back into blogging….xx
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Nice poem.
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Thank you.
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Welcome
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Oh, I like this. I like the mystery. I want to know more. So well done.
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I’m glad to hear that I drew you in.
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