Tiny bits of all of us dancing together.
We think ourselves evolved.
I felt hooked to these lines and read them multiple times. They felt deeply meaningful, as if putting things in perspective. What a beautiful poem with a profound message!
I appreciate that you read this multiple times. That you would slowly ease into my poem and let it wash over you is such a gift to me as the writer.
We think ourselves evolved but are we not made from the same elements as everything else?
Thank you for your thoughts. Have a beautiful day.
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
Beautiful Ali. Your writing has wings!
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Reblogging this to my readers at sister site Timeless Wisdoms
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Ana, thanks for sharing. Have a beautiful day.
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You too, darlin’
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each speck has
a place in the light.
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Yes, may the light shine on each of us.
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Lovely poem and metaphor Ali.
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Thank you Brad. Have a beautiful day.
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Thanks!
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A truly glorious piece Ali
Spicks and specks
Blend by the vortex
We the solar’s subjects
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Great reflection of words. Thank you for your response poem. Have a beautiful day.
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Tiny bits of all of us dancing together.
We think ourselves evolved.
I felt hooked to these lines and read them multiple times. They felt deeply meaningful, as if putting things in perspective. What a beautiful poem with a profound message!
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I appreciate that you read this multiple times. That you would slowly ease into my poem and let it wash over you is such a gift to me as the writer.
We think ourselves evolved but are we not made from the same elements as everything else?
Thank you for your thoughts. Have a beautiful day.
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Beautiful imagery. . .
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Thank you. I took this photograph and altered it to fit the poem’s story.
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Even your words are enough to bring the images to life.
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I truly wish we could learn to value each other. Every human has a gift to give.
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