What do you hold onto
when the bottom drops out
leaving you foundationless?
Your roof carried away by a tornado.
Left only with blankness and a pen
you forgot was in your hand.
I draw myself a new house
openness of windows, tin roof to hear rain
a welcome door without requirements
with the hope that you feel safe enough to visit
uncensored, just as you are not
when you leave the premises
© Ali Grimshaw 2019
“Active Hope is a practice.
Since Active Hope doesn’t require our optimism, we can apply it even in areas where we feel hopeless. The guiding impetus is intention; we choose what we aim to bring about, act for, or express. Rather than weighing our chances and proceeding only when we feel hopeful, we focus on our intention and let it be our guide.”
– Joanna Macy, respected voice in the movements for peace, justice, and ecology.
Sometimes it takes a lot of strength to always rebuilding a house laid in ruins
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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I draw myself a new house
openness of windows, tin roof to hear rain
a welcome door without requirements
I loved the description of this new house and also your poem – it is very true of times like that, and how we can always start over.
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It sounds like you could relate to my words. What would you draw for your new house?
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Exactly what you describe – openness of windows with new vistas and perspectives that wash off any smudge on my mindscape, I can hear the winds and the rains, the door is welcoming and open, I don’t have fears and judgments of who walks in. I loved what you drew so don’t want to do my own drawing 🙂 I have a tendency to hold on to things until the last shred of it is gone, and also have tasted starting over in life repeatedly in some ways – so I would love for the rigid walls of my current home/mind disappear 🙂
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I hear a new found freedom in your words. You are welcome to use my house as long as you would like to. It is a loving place to reside.
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When the thing you hold on to most is not something you can grasp with your hands but it is the most real thing there is. This is wonderful Ali.
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We all have these times in life and poetry is safe place to explore our thoughts.
Keep shining your light Colleen.
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At Best Blessed to Find The Voice of Our Truth…
At Best Given to Dance Sing Truth of Our Light
As We Rise
MoRE NoW
Out of Shadow Breath..:)
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Thank you for your poetic response. Have beautiful day
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Happy Holidays!
Thank You!..:)
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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The ending really called to me:
“a welcome door without requirements
with the hope that you feel safe enough to visit
uncensored, just as you are not
when you leave the premises”
thought the thought of a world uncensored is *slightly* terrifying
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Phillip,
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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This is a most beautiful, beautiful poem about survival and holding on to hope, Ali ❤️ I needed to read this today.. thank you 🙂
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Your message reinforces my belief that we all need each other. We all have gifts to give. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. I hope peace finds you today.
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Yes, uplifting and timely.
🎄Wishing you and your family a wonderful New Year!🎄
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Peace and joy to you as well.
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Very nice last stanza. It is all about making the ruined house safe enough for the other to be there uncensored.
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Frank, I appreciate your response. This poem is all about starting over and creating safe space for all to feel welcome.
I have enjoyed reading the poems on your site this year. Happy Holidays.
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An uplifting message!
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So happy to hear it brought you hope.
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I am going to send this beautiful poem to my son, Ali. His bottom recently dropped out and he is in the process of drawing himself a new house. I think he would appreciate the thoughts on active hope. Thank you!
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I am so honored that you wish to share my poem with your son. I have been to the bottom of the well. It is always important that loved ones are by your side.
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A valuable and inspiring poem, Ali – thank you….
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I’m glad to hear this brought inspiration to your day. Thank you for reading
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Beautiful and inspiring poem, Ali. Hope we could keep our doors and windows open.
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Yes! Let’s not give up. Have a beautiful day.
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WYes so true, Amy. U too have a great day 😊😊😊😊
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Kirsten, Thanks for letting me know. Any time I can add lift to your life it makes my heart beat with joy. You have a special story to tell and your actions are making a difference. I love you, Ali Grimshaw
Make a memory today.
On Thu, Dec 12, 2019 at 4:05 PM flashlight batteries – poetry wrote:
> Ali Grimshaw posted: ” What do you hold onto when the bottom drops out > leaving you foundationless? Your roof carried away by a tornado. Left only > with blankness and a pen you forgot was in your hand. I draw myself a new > house openness of windows, tin roof to hear ra” >
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This is a very inspiring poem about staying strong even when tragedy destroys you. I loved the idea of drawing a new house when one is left only with pen and paper.
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Nitin, it makes me smile to hear that you connected with my words and found them inspiring. We always have the power to choose our response and choosing hope in action keeps me from losing my balance. Thanks for visiting and sharing your thoughts.
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I draw myself a new house
…
a welcome door without requirements
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Thank you dear friend. I always appreciate hearing your reflection. Love to you.
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Oh yes, we indeed need hope. A lot of it. Beautiful poem.
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I hope that this poem brought lift to your day. Thanks for reading.
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It did, Ali. Thank you.
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I hadn’t heard of active hope, but I like this perspective.
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I am not surprised. I thought you would might be interested in this concept based on what you write about.
Joanna Macy is an inspiring woman who has written many books. Great to hear from you. I hope your holiday season is joyful.
Ali
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Thank you Ali. The season has been quiet so far due to my hermit style life. 🙂
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Quiet can be beautifully renewing.
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Your words are indeed full of hope Ali. Beautiful
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Keep sharing your light. Your words always inspire me. I hope all is well in your neck of the woods.
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Thanks so much Ali and yes they are. xx
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Without hope the concept of change can never happen!
Beautiful poem!
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Truth. Active hope is needed and makes a difference. Thanks for stopping by tonight to share your thoughts.
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You are welcome!
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Beautifully synchronised poem with the picture !!
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Thank you Deeksha. We have all had a time when life feels overwhelming and we don’t know how to step forward. Hope keeps me standing.
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I agree with you Ali. Hope is the motivation to keep pushing us on a cloudy day till we greet sunshine.
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beautiful thoughts
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We need active hope in the world. I am glad my words brought beauty to your day.
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