To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night – Gibran
when your words unchanged return, are heard when your song, echoed notes of hue, comes back to you when belonging becomes your word a melting occurs, gray absorbed by blue watercoloring you into the canvas of all becoming whole, no longer fearing the fall Then all the colors of you are revealed poured forth onto the listening canvas of this moment. © Ali Grimshaw 2020 Join the dVerse Poetry Community for Tuesday Poetics
Hi Ali, I agree with all the lovely compliments about your poem. You have a talent for well-chosen words. I am curious about the glass building picture choice. Is it suppose to symbolize the achievement of fitting in and being heard? The glass appears fluid yet I can’t help but think how trapped and unheard one can feel in competitive workspace of a high rise.
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Carolyn,
I appreciate the reflective attention you have given my photo. It is so interesting to hear your thoughts. I chose it because of the watercolor-like reflection it shows on the building. It made me think about how reflective listening.
I hope you will continue to send questions my way. I adore curiosity.
Take care.
Ali
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Oh, that makes sense. Thanks!
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My colours, right now, are hovering between tears and paint boxes,
certain
neither what the tears are falling for
nor
what the new brushes are conjuring,
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What a heart felt reflection you have left here for me.! It is one that speaks to me. Sometimes the tears are just there, just because.
Thank you for this gift to my day.
May your brushes continue to be inspired by all that it means to be you.
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Thank you. Such words are hugely needed right now, and hugely appreciated.
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Thank you for taking the time to fully receive my message with careful listening.
I am really enjoying reading your poems. You have a beautiful way with your words.
Keep shining your light.
Ali
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I love all your imagery in this, Ali — it makes for a lovely metaphor.
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Betty, it is so great to hear from you. I enjoyed reading your poetry as well. I would love to write with you someday.
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Thank you, Ali!
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I so love the reveal at the end. This lines are a gift to read (everyday):
watercoloring you into the canvas of all
becoming whole, no longer fearing the fall
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Grace,
Thank you for reflecting back. I love the moments in life when wholeness can disappear fear.
I always enjoy your poems. Keep on sharing.
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The last three lines stopped me in my tracks … love when poetry does that! Cheers.
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Wow, you made my day. ❤️
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To be heard by a listener and accepted is one of the most cherished interactions humans can do. Being a good listener is a spiritual attribute. How do I know this? Because God is a good listener. Glad you chose the topic you did for your poem, Ali.
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I really like your reflection. I like the idea of listening as a spiritual act. Thank you for sharing that with me.
Be well.
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You’re very welcome, Ali.
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Being heard – then understood – forms a bond between two and makes the speaker visible
at least that’s what I feel.
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Debi,
To be heard in understanding is the experience of becoming visible in the eyes of the listener. That is a beautiful reflection.
If I didn’t receive what you sent please correct me by expanding on this. I want to hear you. I appreciate your response greatly.
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Thank you, Ali. It is really late here and I’m ready for bed. I will respond though tomorrow.
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No worries. Rest well.
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I think you received well. We tend to meet on such superficial levels, never really hearing the innerness of another person and in that way we sort of dismiss people from out thought. They don’t exist except in that brief moment of meeting. Now, that probably really confused the issue. Ha, Thank you though for hearing me and making me visible.
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Debi,
Yes, the question is, “ when are we really listening?” Listening requires presence. Thank you so much for this conversation.
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Isn’t belonging always achieved by giving up part of yourself.
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That is an interesting thought. I guess it depends on your perspective.
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I love the way you have woven the senses into this poem, an audible canvas, visual song.
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Thank you, Jane. I love to create a multi-sensory experience when I am writing.
Take good care of yourself.
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You do that well 🙂
Take care too!
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To be heard, to belong…that’s what we all long for and need. It opens the world. (K)
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Thanks for taking time to hear my words. I appreciate it.
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actually belonging and being heard are not easy achievements and the stark contrast of your pic emphasise this as does your use of colour!
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Thank You for sharing your feedback. It is interesting to think about how we continue to capture experiences in words and pictures.
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it is indeed
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What beauitful imagery!
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I appreciate the compliment. Have a beautiful day.
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You’re welcome. And you too!
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Understanding… and being understood …both valued in any exchange, yet sometimes overlooked.
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Truth be told. Thanks for reading.
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Oh Ali, this is incredibly deep, wise and serene! 😀 I love; “when belonging becomes your word a melting occurs.” Yes! 💝💝
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Sanaarizvi,
I appreciate that you found a deep connection in this. You are the only one to reflect back that line so far. I am curious about our sense of belonging and how it occurs.
Thanks for reading. Be well.
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words are a bridge
to somewhere s else
mini poems and tomes
spanning
these short
cold dry days
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Yes, our words are a bridge between worlds.
Thank you for connecting.
Peace to you.
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I love this, especially: ‘watercoloring you into the canvas of all/becoming whole’ – great interpretation of the prompt!
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Ingrid,
After reading so many of the other poems written from this prompt I thought that mine was not really on topic. But, well, I not always one to stay on topic.
I always enjoy reading what you and others write. Keep on sharing.
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“Gray absorbed by blue watercoloring”… Such a beautiful line, Ali 😀 thanks for sharing and have a good day 😀 I hope all is well 😃 Aiva
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Great to hear from you. With the COVID numbers continuing to rise in the U.S. I feel that I am sitting in gray and reaching toward blue. I hope you and are family have a beautiful day together.
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Beautifully painted poem of awakening – as so often Ali, you encapsulate so much in so few words
“watercoloring you into the canvas of all
becoming whole,”
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Laura,
Thank you for seeing value in my short poems.
I appreciate your reflection.
Thank you for the prompt that got me going with pen to paper. I haven’t been writing as much lately. The dVerse community is a wonderful group.
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A beautiful summing up of why we are part of on-line writers’ communities, Ali, to encounter at least one listener. I love the lines:
‘a melting occurs, gray absorbed by blue
watercoloring you into the canvas of all’.
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Thank you, Kim. I truly love hearing the words that speak to you most. Sometimes I wish I could paint the feelings instead of trying to find the words. But maybe in seeking the words it leads me to a deeper understanding.
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Then all the colors of you are revealed
poured forth onto the listening canvas
of this moment.
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I thought that might just be what you picked to send back my way. Thank you, friend.
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Then all the colors of you are revealed
poured forth onto the listening canvas
of this moment.
How so very absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you for reflecting this back to me. I always appreciate hearing what speaks to you.
Take care of yourself.
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You are very welcome. Much Love to you 🙂
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I love your poem Ali. Being heard and belong in life are basic needs. Much harder to accomplish during this time in our lives.
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Dwight,
Belonging is something we all seek in one way or another. It is a basic need.
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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Yes it is… that is why we enjoy the d’Verse group so much.
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Truth be told.
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Thank you Ali.
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I really liked this Ali. “listening canvas of this moment.” Great last line… 🙂
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Rob,
I appreciate you reflecting back the line that most spoke to you. I am especially curious about when people feel heard. Listening to others is dear to my heart.
Stay warm and well.
Ali
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