“Sometimes it takes darkness and the sweet / confinement of your aloneness / to learn / anything or anyone / that does not bring you alive / is too small for you.” – David Whyte
tug and pull, I must
still it doesn’t fit anymore
not after this year
hundreds of breaths have past
in between arrivals and goodbyes
and I am changed
now I have new thoughts
I pull on like the wool sweater
you used to wear on your
most difficult of days.
Thoughts that have rooted
myself to you
intertwined with the me
I have yet to meet.
© Ali Grimshaw 2021 dVerse Open Link Night - Join a friendly community of poets.
Happy New Year!
Wishing you deep full breaths of peace.
Beautifully written! Happy New Year, Ali!
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Leif,
I appreciate the compliment. Happy New Year to you as well. Be well.
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You carried the metaphor marvellously! I really loved the starting haiku too, Happy New year, Ali. ~ Jay
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Thank you, Jay. David Whyte is a inspiring poet. I hope you seek out more of his poems. I appreciate your response. Have a beautiful day.
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Really nicely crafted.
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Akam, I truly appreciate this compliment. Wishing you peace and wellness.
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Thank you
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The things we root ourselves in, our thoughts and emotions, are so important. Your words made me think back to some of the things I let go last year that just weren’t good for me. It was hard letting go, because of change, but that is growth. Not always enjoyable, but necessary. 💯
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Tricia,
Thank you for considering my poem so thoughtfully. Letting go of what no longer serves you can be challenging and you can also walk away lighter. I am glad that we have connected in the blogosphere.
Wishing you peace,
Ali
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‘the me I have yet to meet’
There’s trepidation in those words, but you’re pulling on that jumper regardless. The first step.
I enjoyed this poem.
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Jane,
Thank you for reading and reflecting back. My hope is that there is always a part of me I have yet to meet. It means that I am continuing to grow. Glad to hear you enjoyed my words.
Peace to you.
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I hadn’t thought of it that way before, but it’s a great concept.
You too 🙂
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I so love the quote you have chosen as a springboard for your poem, Ali! Especially touched by the image; “I pull on like the wool sweater you used to wear on your most difficult of days.”💝💝 Happy New Year to you and yours! 🙂
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Yes, the beginning is from David Whyte. He is a fabulous poet. Glad to hear it inspired.
Keep shining your light. The world needs all the light it can get.
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Happy New Year Ali, wishing you deep full breaths of peace and blessings 💖💫
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Yes! Thank you. Lots of deep full breaths. Breathe in the love. May you find peace in this day and poems to inspire.
I appreciate you.
Ali
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Thank you Ali 💜
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Yes, the new year is filled with new possibilities, not the least because we are changed ourselves. Lovely poem, Ali! And Happy New Year to you and yours!
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Happy New Year Ann. I appreciate all of the poems you have read here on Flashlight Batteries in 2020. You are so kind to continue to reflect your thoughts back to me.
Wishing you much wellness .
Ali
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Masterfully done. Fantastic throughout, especially the build up to the end. Happy New Year!
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I appreciate your response. Thank you for reading.
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You’re welcome. Look forward to reading more soon.
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intertwined with the me
I have yet to meet.
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Thank you my friend. May we both continue to grow in ways big and small.
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Beautiful Ali. I often think of the me I have yet to meet. And the me I have transformed or left behind. Happy New Year !
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Colleen,
I can tell you are a lifelong learner by your writing. Here’s to 2021 and new adventures in learning.
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Thank you Ali, that comment means a lot to me.
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Beautiful poem Ali. I can very much relate to the words. I wish you a peaceful and safe new year.
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This is beautiful. Happy New Year to you. 💕
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Thank you for reading. Wishing you a marvelous new year.
Ali
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Happy New Year Ali..
“My key is low and unopened
My sea is a rough ocean
My year might be right or wrong
My dreams are this year’s theme song”
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Wonder, Ivor. I look forward to reading your poems and writing with you again in 2021. Nothing can stop us from weaving our words together as a net love for others.
Be well.
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Thank you Ali… and yes we have a lot to forward too…and may compassion, kindness, and love continue to flourish
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Masterpieces come like this –
like soft sweaters
and gentle breaths…
and the words that dance between them.
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Thank you for reading and reflecting back. I hope my words brought lift to your day.
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Happy New Year Ali! May it be a year with more love and compassion.
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Agreed. May compassionate listening help us find new pathways forward. I took a class from https://www.compassionatelistening.org/ this year and loved it. It is an ongoing commitment I have to find ways to provide new possibilities through listening.
Take care and keep shining your light.
Ali
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Thanks Ali. Kudos on your commitment to compassion.
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I am only one but I can take actions that only I can. Keep sharing your inspirations with others. Your voice matters.
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We each matter. Thank you again.
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we make
our share
happy new years
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Each action,
each something that didn’t exist before
Blooms a possibility.
Happy new year
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Beautiful poem, Ali. And…how shall we root ourselves going into the new year. A very thoughtful question, my friend. Thank you.
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I would love to hear your answer to the question of what am I reading myself to in this next year. Thank you for pondering it with me. Sending you love.☮️
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Oops. That was meant to say rooting. Although I would love to hear what you’re reading as well.
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Ali, I tend to view life most broadly. For that reason, I root myself in love so that any choices I make to listen, create, or be in service are rooted in the life sustaining energy that we all are…even though some don’t know it and we individually, often forget when we are experiencing stress. Count me as rooted in love. 💖
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Yes, I experience this from you. ❤️ thank you for being a presence of love in the world.
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This is beautiful, Ali! Happy New Year!
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Happy New Year. What are you rooting yourself to as you step forward into a brand new month?
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To be honest, I’ll be happy to stay alive throughout this year. I’m going to continue to take it “fifteen minutes at a time” and be as creative as I can while I do so. ☺️
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Aliveness and creativity. I am going to root myself in those as well. Thank you for sharing. May you find strength each day for all that your heart desires.
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Peace, Ali. May you find the same. Thank you.
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