Enjoyed the metaphor here and especially the idea of self-examination along with the knowledge there will be more expeditions and there is always learning and growth the be had. 💖
Good question. I think this is a poem I am going to return to and develop further. I appreciate you reflection back. I will dig into the relationship to the map.
Love the way you conclude this beautiful piece Ali, just wonderful! And the pic of that topographical art piece is so fascinating, thank you for sharing it.
Helen,
Thank you for your kind response. I love it when I can marry a photo I have taken with my words and create something that inspires others.
Make it a great day.
Ali
wow, that was extraordinary! beautify written, such an elegant flow, great descriptions here, her self-discovery, retracing the map of herself, where she’s been and where she’s going… loved this
The artist who made this sculpture used to live in Portland. I would love to credit him but can’t remember his name. His sculptures are amazing. Glad to hear you liked the poem.
I adored the concept and imagery of your poem Ali …
Whoops .. your 10.00am ‘writing circle’ starts are too early for me, it’s 3.00am next day for me … sorry ..
Ivor,
Thanks for stopping by. I will be setting up another writing circle that will work for your Austriala time zone soon. Stay tuned.
Keep sharing your light in words.
Ali
I LOVE this. The first stanza immersed me entirely:
“Thinly sliced sections of her heart
carefully laid bare
an inner dissection
to find the magnificence of awe
that is her heartwisdom.”
Overcoming hard times and trials to find the beauty from within, that’s such a powerful statement here (how I view the poem, at least). Beautifully penned, it also shows elements of vulnerability such as scars (moments mapped on skin) and how it delineates growth in becoming who we are now. Lovely work.
I LOVE this idea of topography and how you’ve developed it here.
“contours fallen from while yearning” oh yes…..sometimes our yearning for what we don’t or can’t have may be our demised and be cause for a shift in topography!
Thank you for your feedback LIllian. I appreciate it. It was interesting to reread how I had written this poem in 2019. I enjoyed rewriting it today to shift it toward my current experience. The topography of me is always evolving while the core remains the same.
Thanks for hosting OLN.
Ali
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Thank you so much for sharing this. ..very peaceful .
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Thanks so much!
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Thanks for sharing ❤️
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Enjoyed the metaphor here and especially the idea of self-examination along with the knowledge there will be more expeditions and there is always learning and growth the be had. 💖
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Tricia, Thank you for the feedback. I’m glad to hear you could relate to this
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Incredible imagery your words create 💛✨
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Pragalbha,
Thank you for taking the time to leave such kind feedback. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Be kind to yourself.
Ali
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I love the metaphor of topography… I can see how each one has it, the only thing I wonder is if there is a map to see it.
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Good question. I think this is a poem I am going to return to and develop further. I appreciate you reflection back. I will dig into the relationship to the map.
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What a beautiful metaphor rich with lived wisdom.
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Thank you! Make it a great day.
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You’re welcome, Ali.
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loved it.
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Thank you
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Such vivid imagery, which matches that wonderful piece of art. The idea of exploring the evolving topography of self is wonderful.
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Thank you for your feedback. It is satisfying to hear that you found this idea inspiring.
Have a great weekend.
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You’re welcome!
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I love the concept. Beautiful poem!
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Thank you for the compliment. I appreciate it.
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“While traveling toward her next becoming” — lovely! peace ~Jason
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Thank you for reflecting back the words that spoke most to you. Wishing you a great day, Jason.
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You as well!
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She continues to traverse past valleys
while climbing toward her next becoming
still a proposed expedition.
Love the way you conclude this beautiful piece Ali, just wonderful! And the pic of that topographical art piece is so fascinating, thank you for sharing it.
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Rob,
Thank you for reflecting back the lines that most spoke to you. I appreciate it greatly.
Make it a great day.
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that is her heartwisdom
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She is listening. Thank you for listening with her. Love to you.
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Love the flow and imagery. The last verse really got me.
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Mubashshira,
Thank you for taking the time to let me know that this poem reached you today. May love land on you and may you breathe in peace.
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Well, the IMAGE followed by the poetry … had me sitting here with mouth open! A great big wow from Bend Oregon!
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Helen,
Thank you for your kind response. I love it when I can marry a photo I have taken with my words and create something that inspires others.
Make it a great day.
Ali
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Ali,
Your poem is as striking as the artwork, looking back at the valleys as instrumental to becoming, progressing as the present. Lovely.
pax,
dora
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Dora,
I love to inspire thoughtful reflection through poetry. Thank you for your thoughts.
Take good care,
Ali
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, Ali! Hope you have a great day!! xoxox 😘💕🎁🌹
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Have a marvelous day.
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I love your multi-layered imagery here Ali, particularly ‘he magnificence of awe
that is her heartwisdom.’ We are so much more than surface.
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“Climbing toward next becoming” – this feels like a gentle tug from the hand of one larger/stronger than me – encouraging me. Beautiful, Ali.
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Thank you for your reflection, Jazz. I love words of encouragement. Life is challenging and we can all use a lift. Take good care.
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wow, that was extraordinary! beautify written, such an elegant flow, great descriptions here, her self-discovery, retracing the map of herself, where she’s been and where she’s going… loved this
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Thank you for the “wow.” I so appreciate your feedback.
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Well done! Love the art piece! Very unique. Love the images and metaphors of a heart cut open and laid bare piece by piece… slice by slice!
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The artist who made this sculpture used to live in Portland. I would love to credit him but can’t remember his name. His sculptures are amazing. Glad to hear you liked the poem.
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I adored the concept and imagery of your poem Ali …
Whoops .. your 10.00am ‘writing circle’ starts are too early for me, it’s 3.00am next day for me … sorry ..
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Ivor,
Thanks for stopping by. I will be setting up another writing circle that will work for your Austriala time zone soon. Stay tuned.
Keep sharing your light in words.
Ali
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I LOVE this. The first stanza immersed me entirely:
“Thinly sliced sections of her heart
carefully laid bare
an inner dissection
to find the magnificence of awe
that is her heartwisdom.”
Overcoming hard times and trials to find the beauty from within, that’s such a powerful statement here (how I view the poem, at least). Beautifully penned, it also shows elements of vulnerability such as scars (moments mapped on skin) and how it delineates growth in becoming who we are now. Lovely work.
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Thank you, Lucy. I truly appreciate your feedback. It’s always rewarding to hear when my words resonate with someone who reads them.
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I LOVE this idea of topography and how you’ve developed it here.
“contours fallen from while yearning” oh yes…..sometimes our yearning for what we don’t or can’t have may be our demised and be cause for a shift in topography!
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Thank you for your feedback LIllian. I appreciate it. It was interesting to reread how I had written this poem in 2019. I enjoyed rewriting it today to shift it toward my current experience. The topography of me is always evolving while the core remains the same.
Thanks for hosting OLN.
Ali
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