“Travel is about the gorgeous feeling
of teetering in the unknown.” – Anthony Bourdain
One, listen for the sound of water moving freely
it finds a way forward without argument
over moss, between stones.
Two, follow the rain slicked planks
built to cross this earthy beauty
in curved rather than straight lines.
Three, notice how many shades of green exist
chartreuse, emerald cucumber, pine.
Look again, then again.
Name some of your own making
watermoss.
Four, feel mist envelope
as raindrops greet
you are water too.
Five, sing forth your internal compass
join the hum of molecules
one song is enough.
© Ali Grimshaw 2023
Written in Response to "Five Directions to My House" by Juan Felipe Herrera. Hear him read his poem HERE. This prompt came from dVerse Poets' Pub. Come join a friendly, welcoming community of poets.
Photograph taken at Plitvice Lakes National Park in Croatia.
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“Three, notice how many shades of green exist
chartreuse, emerald cucumber, pine.
Look again, then again.
Name some of your own making
watermoss.”
Beautiful, my favourite stanza 🙂
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Sunra,
Thank you for taking the time to send the lines back to me that spoke to you.
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Brilliant and lovely, especially “watermoss”.
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Thank you kindly.☮️
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I love all those shades of green… so many that you can name one for yourself.
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Thanks for stopping by.
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