She overcame
her internal screaming toddler,
“I don’t wanna. I don’t wanna.”
Will Power offered a hand
linking her arm in his
to lead around the corner.
Her first step through
this now open door
a route unavailable
to her past self.
© Alicia Grimshaw 2017
Photo taken in Lisbon, Portugal 2017
Really beautiful, Ali. And through the door, love awaits … with a hug. 🙂
Lovely photo too. I was recently in Lisbon on a peace trip. Gorgeous.
Love,
Debbie
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Debbie. Yes, love is always waiting for us. Have a beautiful day.
LikeLiked by 1 person
The photo goes nicely with the poem, Ali. I wonder how you’d like “inner” (for the “internal”).
Xxxxx
D.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the feedback. I always appreciate hearing from you. I will think on that idea.
LikeLike
Breathe Forest Words teaches us the cachophony isn’t real and doesn’t warrant out attention and intention.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLike
May we all overcome our inner screaming toddler!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Ann.
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s a beautiful poem, that matches your photo perfectly!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
She overcame
her internal screaming toddler,
LikeLiked by 1 person
Kirsten, thank you for your reflection.
LikeLike
What a beautiful truth expressed in the last stanza: that new routes become available to us as we change and grow.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Magarisa. I appreciate your reflective response.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome, Ali.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A Beautifully warm poem, and I hope her step through the doorway turns into lovely journey for her.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great poem and the picture really enhances it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLike
Great photo! Keep clicking 🙂
LikeLike
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the visual romanticism in this piece. The photo adds a nice touch but I when I close my eyes… I see a different type of door.
Must find more time to recharge with your batteries.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Mel, I love that you see a different kind of door. Poetry leaves space for the reader to create his own vision.
I sit smiling knowing that my words are helping you to recharge. This is my intention in blogging, to give and connect openly.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes! I definitely agree. You’re poetry speaks softly to me. It also evokes a feeling of warmth. Lovely.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Mel. All of my words come from my heart.
LikeLike
I can feel it.
LikeLiked by 1 person