Willing my body to enter the room
a mountain of mortification on my back
being seen while craving camouflage.
Owning the me that showed up
failure and intention, the human package
tied up with a bow of expectations.
While seeking an empty seat,
I investigate shedding shame, cast off
of the past. Owning my skin before
molting of forgiveness.
© Ali Grimshaw 2018
Sintra, Portugal 2017 – Weathered
Thank you for including me in your post today.
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These 3 lines really spoke to me:
Owning the me that showed up
failure and intention, the human package
tied up with a bow of expectations.
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Thank you Etta. It is always a good feeling to know that my words have resonated with someone.
Have a beautiful day.
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Wow …the first 3 lines gripped me and the rest too kept me hooked. I can relate to the journey of owning myself with all that I am.
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Thanks for sharing this. It is always rewarding to know when my poetry resonates with someone.
I really enjoy your blog. Make it a great day.
Ali
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All my pleasure. You have an amazing day too!
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Thanks for sharing my poem. I hope it inspires the forgiving journey in others. Forgiving ourselves can be so challenging.
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Owning the me that showed up
failure and intention, the human package
tied up with a bow of expectations.
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Thanks Kirsten. It is always a gift to receive your reflection. Make it a great day my friend.
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Ali, this is gorgeous! I especially love how you wrote about owning the skin before the molting of forgiveness. To me, it is so important to truly see our humanity – and to be willing to accept and love these parts of ourselves – that eases the way for the gift of forgiveness. Sending you love and Light. Shame is not always the easiest to shed. ❤ Many hugs. Debbie ps – I'm honored to share this poem for #ForgivingFridays
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Debbie, I am glad to hear that this poem resonated with you. Self-forgiveness is so important. I appreciate your commitment to sharing ways for people to heal through forgiveness. Keep shining your light. Ali
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Metamorphosis, lovely, great word choice and theme. Really enjoyed this one!
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Thank you Kayla Ann for the feedback. Make it a great day.
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Love this one. Great job.
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Thanks for letting me know. Be kind to yourself today.
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Nice one Ali!
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That means a lot coming from you. Thanks.
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