One day I finally knew that I could swim
in the blue of the sky.
That I was as strong as my declaration.
My fears, teachers made just for me.
That there would always be cracks to slip through
times of trembling, shaken awake to fall again.
Then I stood next to the lake,
a mirror of blue sky wholeness,
arms wide with acceptance
I, the problem and solution
dove into
reflection of release.
© Alicia Grimshaw 2019 (rewrite of 2017 poem)
Photo taken on a family trip to Varenna, Italy 2016
Loved it!! Last line is beautiful!
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Thank you Deeksha, I appreciate hearing from you.
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Really like how you wrote this one, Ali. ‘swim in the blue of the sky.’ reminds me of soaring high, reaching up and moving along to reach your dreams. Then I like how you alluded to that there may be challenges and we may fall…and we may fall to a beautiful place that will teach us the lessons we need to learn. Beautiful write (rewrite), probably one of my favourite pieces from you 🙂
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Mabel thank you for your thoughtful reflection and for letting me know that this is one of your favorites. I really appreciate the feedback.
Be well and love big. We only get one life to live.
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It really is one of my favourites, Ali. So eloquently written with the subtle emotions of life shining through. You take care and stay well 🙂
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Ali, this is profound. I love how you have so many wisdoms in the same poem – surrender, our issues as blessings, acceptance, life as continual learning, and the courage of knowing we can handle what’s next. I am moved and uplifted again. Thank you.
Did you take that photo in Varenna? I’ve been there with my ex-husband! Gorgeous place.
Blessings to you my friend. Have a beautiful week.
Love and Light,
Debbie
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Debbie,
Great to hear from you. It makes me so happy that you feel uplifted and inspired by this poem. That is always my intention.
Yes, with rare exception, I take all the photos that I use on my blog.
I am sure your new coaching around money and forgiveness is opening new doors for people. I would love to hear how it is going.
Be well and love BIG,
Ali
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Your photography is Light-filled and truly beautiful, Ali!
Sounds great on the group. I’ll share more with you soon.
Much love to you, Ali! ~Debbie
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Lovely.
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Thank you. I hope you get to dive into something fun today.
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Work today, but hopefully some fun this week.
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My fears, teachers made just for me….
I, the problem and solution
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Thank you Kirsten. Have a beautiful day my friend.
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Swimming in the sky, what a lovely, free feeling…when I find myself in water again, I’ll think of this beautiful image and words!
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Our imagination can take us anywhere we want to go. Have a beautiful day.
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Thank you!
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I want to dive into that lake too! Beautiful.
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I hope you find something fulfilling to dive into today.
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Wow, I love…”I the problem and solution” So Powerful!
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Alexis, have you ever realized that you are the problem and the solution? It is an empowering realization.
Thanks for reflecting back to me what you loved in this poem.
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Yes, just sooo Empowering! Its a great mantra.
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So poweful
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I appreciate that coming from you. You have inspired and continue to inspire so many. Have a great day
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Beautiful. Powerful. Affirming.
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I hope these words lift to you and inspire you as he step forward this week
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