Can you be
with your own silence?
Walking with yourself
wherever you go
naked
or clothed in words
that warm
or weigh you down.
Will you mirror
a friendly listener
hear your own voice
gently?
© Ali Grimshaw 2019
Shadows in Kauai, Hawaii 2018
Today’s challenge is to write a poem that ends with a question. This poem was inspired by a fellow blogger, Pragalbha’s post. Thank you for the inspiration. I wrote this after reading her words today, “Being With Myself”
So honored to be mentioned, thank you!
I loved the soft gentleness of your poem. The qualities of whether we walk with ourselves truly silent or with words and what they bring – such beautiful description in so less words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for your reflection and for your inspiration. Be well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I can be with my own silence, I have always respected that time.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Maybe we are all born with this ability but along the way of life get out of practice?
LikeLike
I think that is part of it. I am lucky to have always been comfortable with my silence. Though I am not always comfortable with other people’s silence.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too. People who don’t talk are hard for me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sleeping in my room.
Listening to the food of soul
It sound brightening my heart.
Inspiring everything around me
Giving it a endless joy
Hope this will last for a while?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for your poetic response.
LikeLike
Walking with your friend in silence and that is Yourself. Beautiful and profound poem, Ali.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. I am so happy you found these words inspiring.
LikeLike
Welcome Ali
LikeLike
So beautiful, Ali. I did a Doctoral Program in Spiritual Science, and we choose intentions for each level of consciousness. My intention for the spiritual was stillness for some time.
You have a lovely, harmonious, and almost lilting style of writing. I really love it.
Blessings to you!
Love and Light,
Debbie
LikeLiked by 1 person
Debbie,
I truly appreciate your feedback. Your thoughtfulness comes through in every message you have sent me. Have a glorious day my friend.
Love & light,
Ali
LikeLiked by 1 person
Walking with yourself
wherever you go
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you my friend.
LikeLike