26 thoughts on “Taking Flight – Poem by Ali Grimshaw”
This is such a beautiful, a heartwarming ode to parents that go through this period of transition. I love; “I was always ever the warm nest from which you would someday fly.”❤️❤️
Beautiful! I felt that “joypain” of yours when reading. I have a sixteen-year-old and I know the day for him to fly is coming, but I’m having a hell of a time getting him to just drive now😆
Beautiful sentiments and a wonderful way of understanding a momentous occasion like graduation. I attend my niece’s tomorrow and I think of her future and celebrate all the memories of the past.
Beautiful Ali. Every parent gets the opportunity to let go and allow their children to fly. Although difficult, It is a gift for parents and children. 🦅
Ali, this poem is beautiful. And the words above are just what I needed this day to describe a deep sadness that is growing…not related to the joy of graduation from an educational institution; rather the “joypain” of beginning the process of letting a beloved pet go…
The best words, woven together bring all emotions into a state of beauty in the process of growing, leaving, transcending…ultimately ascending. 💜
When we love with our whole heart there is a joypain in letting go. I’m sorry to hear you’re saying goodbye to a pet you love. That is just never easy. Thanks for sharing your reflection back to me. I greatly appreciate that, my friend.❤️☮️
This is such a beautiful, a heartwarming ode to parents that go through this period of transition. I love; “I was always ever the warm nest from which you would someday fly.”❤️❤️
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Thank you for reflecting back the words that most spoke to you. There are layers of emotions in the letting go.
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A moving beautiful ode to that very special transition so many parents go through. Bravo ❤
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Thank you for your kind response. This is an evolving piece there’s so much to capture so many layers of emotion in this transition.
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You captured this so well and the poem resonates with me as my youngest is finally graduating from university next week. Love this ending lines:
I was always ever the warm nest
from which you would someday fly.
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Thanks Grace. It makes me happy that you connected with my words as you experience this transition. Poetry is such a great connector.
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A touching poem. I both look forward and dream this moment of life.
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Love is complicated and worth it.
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It must be such an emotional day for the parent: perhaps more so than for the child!
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Beautiful! I felt that “joypain” of yours when reading. I have a sixteen-year-old and I know the day for him to fly is coming, but I’m having a hell of a time getting him to just drive now😆
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Enjoy every minute.
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Beautiful sentiments and a wonderful way of understanding a momentous occasion like graduation. I attend my niece’s tomorrow and I think of her future and celebrate all the memories of the past.
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Thank you. Enjoy this special occasion to the fullest
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Lovely!
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Thanks for taking the time to visit, Rupali.
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That’s just lovely! Successful parenting means eventually letting go….. Not easy, but so very necessarya!
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Thanks, Ann. There is no other journey like it. I am grateful to have two wonderful sons.
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a tight bundled joypain sits within
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Thank you for your reflection ❤️
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Beautiful Ali. Every parent gets the opportunity to let go and allow their children to fly. Although difficult, It is a gift for parents and children. 🦅
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Agreed. Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts. Wishing you a beautiful day
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Your words are both reflectively anxious and brave, and full of joyous anticipation …
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Thank you, Ivor, for reading and share your thoughts.
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“…a tight bundled joypain sits within my chest…”
Ali, this poem is beautiful. And the words above are just what I needed this day to describe a deep sadness that is growing…not related to the joy of graduation from an educational institution; rather the “joypain” of beginning the process of letting a beloved pet go…
The best words, woven together bring all emotions into a state of beauty in the process of growing, leaving, transcending…ultimately ascending. 💜
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When we love with our whole heart there is a joypain in letting go. I’m sorry to hear you’re saying goodbye to a pet you love. That is just never easy. Thanks for sharing your reflection back to me. I greatly appreciate that, my friend.❤️☮️
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