A wonderful poem, Ali. Appearances and what’s in front us can be fleeting and leave you wondering. Love the last two lines. So many possibilities. Hope you are well 🙂
Mabel,
Great to hear from you. It’s been a while. I appreciate your reflecting back. I haven’t been riding as much lately. I’m struggling to put my thoughts and feelings into words. How’s it going for you?
So important to question our own views as its only one perception, one angle, we view, as when sitting and gazing at the horizon, as you so elegantly describe. 👏👏
Karen,
Thanks. It came through my pen onto the paper just as it is. I hope it inspires others to question. I have found much value in inquiring into my beliefs.
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
I enjoyed your poem. It is important to question what we think is true.
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Agreed. Thank you for spending time with my poems today. Wishing you a day beauty
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A wonderful poem, Ali. Appearances and what’s in front us can be fleeting and leave you wondering. Love the last two lines. So many possibilities. Hope you are well 🙂
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Mabel,
Great to hear from you. It’s been a while. I appreciate your reflecting back. I haven’t been riding as much lately. I’m struggling to put my thoughts and feelings into words. How’s it going for you?
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Thought-provoking, especially those last lines. Well done, Ali!
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Thank you for the positive feedback. Have an awesome day
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I so wonder about the last line… when the truth is personal instead of general everything can be questioned
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Indeed. There is always something to explore
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Ponderable questions, Ali. Your ending couplet…
question the truth of your view
question the view of your truth…is so profound! So well expressed.
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Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. The magic of my life lives in the questions.
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You are so welcome. The day we stop questioning, we cease to exist.
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So important to question our own views as its only one perception, one angle, we view, as when sitting and gazing at the horizon, as you so elegantly describe. 👏👏
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Exactly, Tricia. It is so easy to forget that what each of us sees can be so vastly different.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Enjoyed it! ❤️
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Well done.
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Thank you.☮️
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the eyes we look through
when seeking
change what we see…
where you sit
doesn’t always enable you to see
sunrise or the full length of horizon
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Thank you for reflecting back. ❤️
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Beautiful message with your ending couplet:
question the truth of your view
question the view of your truth
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Love this Ali. 👏🧡
‘question the truth of your view
question the view of your truth’
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Karen,
Thanks. It came through my pen onto the paper just as it is. I hope it inspires others to question. I have found much value in inquiring into my beliefs.
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Yes that’s beautiful 🧡
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