
Your belief in aloneness is your greatest mistake. You were born into the hands of the world, for us to sing you through. Mountains to call you upward rivers to bring forth and release. For what you are made of, I am made of elements of rock, sky and sea. Your error is not that you are broken It is that you have yet to see your wholeness. © Alicia Grimshaw 2023 Join a welcoming community of poets for Open Link Night on dVerse Poets Pub, HERE.
Love the optimism here… we have all those possibilities.
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It is never too late to adjust my own thinking unless I decide it is.
Thanks for stopping by.
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This is such an incredibly deep and evocative write, Ali!! 💖💖💖
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I am glad to hear you were able to connect with this poem. Thanks for reading.
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I really love what you did with this poem, Ali. So wonderfully written tying everything together with everything else.
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Thank you for spending some time with my pome today. Wishing you a great day.
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You are most welcome, Ali!
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Brilliant!
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You are too kind.
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Wow Ali! Great words of profound wisdom my friend — excellent! Oh, snd don’t for get stardust — we got a bit of that in out historical makeup.
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Rob, thank you for you kind reply. I appreciate it.
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Such a beautiful poem and thought, Ali. 💙
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Thanks for stopping by Merril.
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You’re welcome!
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This is beautiful, Ali. Reading it again, I felt the words reminding me and inviting me back to my wholeness. Such a wonderful poem to read first thing this morning. 🌞☘️💜
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Carrie,
I love that my words invited you back to your wholeness this morning. How wonderful.
I look forward to writing with you again soon. It has been too long.
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You were born into the hands
of the world…
For what you are made of, I am made of
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Thank you for reflecting back the words I spoke to you.❤️
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What a wonderful poem. I really like the final verse.
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Thank you, Suzanne. Wishing you a beautiful day.
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