Beautiful, Ali. Multi-layered, multi-textured, multi-faceted, and woven together in a way that provides a complex picture that we are all familiar with.
Carrie,
Thanks so much for the feedback. This did not feel finished, but I didn’t want to wait to share it. Life is complex and I enjoy the challenge of trying to put that into a poem. I look forward to writing with you soon.❤️☮️
I’m so glad you didn’t wait. You gave us enough to create a complex picture as we explore ways in which we may complete a picture by adding our individual gifts. 💜☮️
Oh dear Ali, This poem was filled with such amazing imagery and emotion. Thank you for this today. I wish you and your family a very blessed Easter. Fredda
Fredda,
Thank you for letting me know my words reached you today. I spent a lot of time on this poem yesterday. My heart was in it 100%. Happy Easter. Sending you love.
Ali
This was such an amazing flow to read Ali! Water & Love – the 2 essential tastes of life and how they vary depending on where – very beautiful!
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Great to hear from you. Thank you so much for reflecting back how you experienced this poem. ❤️☮️
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You are very welcome 🙂
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this is a great reminder to me of what I take for granted and to show compassion to those who need it, as well. Thanks for sharing! 💗✒️💗
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Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.☮️
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Pleasure!💗
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Wow! So many imbalances
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Thanks for visiting.
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My pleasure, always!
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I love this, Ali. Poignant and thought-provoking.
“pushing your ego aside to make room for hearing”
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Thank you for reflecting back. I truly appreciate it.
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Beautiful, Ali. Multi-layered, multi-textured, multi-faceted, and woven together in a way that provides a complex picture that we are all familiar with.
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Carrie,
Thanks so much for the feedback. This did not feel finished, but I didn’t want to wait to share it. Life is complex and I enjoy the challenge of trying to put that into a poem. I look forward to writing with you soon.❤️☮️
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I’m so glad you didn’t wait. You gave us enough to create a complex picture as we explore ways in which we may complete a picture by adding our individual gifts. 💜☮️
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Oh dear Ali, This poem was filled with such amazing imagery and emotion. Thank you for this today. I wish you and your family a very blessed Easter. Fredda
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Fredda,
Thank you for letting me know my words reached you today. I spent a lot of time on this poem yesterday. My heart was in it 100%. Happy Easter. Sending you love.
Ali
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