
Oh what can be unfolded inside my twisted heart by sunlight on water as artful swimmers ease through surface and depth as one painting. I'm captivated by colors that ask What is truly lasting? When the world shouts, IMPOSSIBLE! Love replies, "Just watch me." © Ali Grimshaw 2023 Quadrille #168 - Fold Learn more about this and join the fun HERE Photo taken in Croatia 2023.
LOVe that last stanza!!!
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One action I can take every day is to remind others of the power of love. Thanks for reading.
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Ali – these are gorgeous words for a gorgeous thought.
Much love,
David
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I hope we will continue to turn toward love.
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This is such a wonderful message of hope and positivity and expresses the belief that love is more powerful than any other negative emotion. Thanks for sharing, and have a wonderful day 🙂 Aiva xx
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Aiva,
Thank you for reading my words, and standing with me in the power of love .
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🥰🥰🥰
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Love finds a way. Beautiful, positive message, Ali. And cool photo, too!
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Thank you. Have a blessed day.
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You’re welcome.
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This is beautiful.❤️
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I am glad you found it so.
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Sunlight on water can do that to you, Ali! And I love “Just watch me.” A girl after my own heart.
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This is my chosen response to the tragedy in the world.♥️
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I love this, and the way you used the scenery to give a message of love.
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Thank you.☮️
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Love is truly lasting. What beautiful words and sentiments Ali. 💗
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Miriam, great to hear from you. Our world needs all the love it can get.
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Yes it does 🙏
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“Just watch me” suits you to a T.
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Helen,
I appreciate that compliment more than you know .❤️
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Beautiful verse about the positive transformations that are possible.
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May you feel loved today.
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Thank you so much, Ali. 💜
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I like the way love defies the impossible!
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Me too!☮️
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I like the way love defies the impossible!
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You and me both.❤️
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Loved those final lines. Let’s hope can continue to win.
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Active hope matters❤️
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Mesmerizing, beautiful, and so positively positive I had to read it three times (which doesn’t happen often. Thanks.
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May love land on you today, Ron. Thanks for your supportive response.
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Beautifully written… the beauty of sunlight on water is magnificent!
Love your closing lines.
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So much magic can happen with just water and sunlight.
Wishing you a great day.
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Thank you!
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That meant to say “thread” not “three”! 🙂
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Thanks for reading.
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Love the hopeful three throughout this poem, Ali. And the complementary image is wonderful!
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I took so many photos of this pond. I love that I can feel such joy from unplanned encounters.
Wishing you wellness and joy.
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“Just watch me.”
YES! Wonderful!
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Love is winning somewhere, everywhere all the time.
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