Within my rooted being lies a box of green when the world becomes too loud for living I retreat to this sanctuary of survival lined with dewy moss to quench and revive.
Within my rooted being lies a box of yellow when heart is crushed by grief, weary from war I find my way to this room of sunshine warm with light to feel my pain, begin again.
Within my rooted being lies a box of clarity when my feet have forgotten the feel of freedom when my head spins in dismay I hold my heart in both hands, ask for help believing love is on the way.
A truly touching poem, I loved looking at it partially beyond the words of lyricism, and as an advice to each reader to nurture and grow such a ‘box’ spiritually for themselves.
Ali, I immediately connected to the colors of your boxes and their contents. The last stanza really speaks to me. This is a profound poem that touches my heart.
Such a wonderful poem, Ali. When the air around you feels heavy, when the world around you looks to be in turmoil, it’s important to find your sanctuary, to retreat into it so you can truly hear and listen to the voice of your soul. Thanks for sharing, and have a good day 🙂 Aiva xx
This is gorgeously encapsulated, Ali! I especially resonate with; “when the world becomes too loud for living I retreat to this sanctuary of survival.” 💖💖
Thanks Melissa. This was a quick write but I enjoyed thinking of the boxes inside of me. I know the prompt called for one box but I am always going outside the lines.
That box of sunshine calls to me. I need sun to feel happy and alive, and it is nice to know that when it is not outside, I can find it inside.
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I love how you describe it as a box of green rooted in one’s being. We should all cultivate this anchoring space within us at the current time ❤️
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Sunra, thank you for reflecting back. I agree we need places to nurture our souls. Poetry is one way we can renewal.☮️
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heart in my hands .. oh so gentle. love that
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Thank you for letting me know that my words reached you today.❤️☮️
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I hold my heart in both hands, ask for help
believing love is on the way.
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Thank you ❤️☮️
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Ali, I love your rooted boxes that bring you sanctuary, warmth, and hope and how you associate them with growth and healing light.
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I hope they inspired you to look for yours. Thanks for visiting.
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A truly touching poem, I loved looking at it partially beyond the words of lyricism, and as an advice to each reader to nurture and grow such a ‘box’ spiritually for themselves.
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Thank you for letting me know how you experienced this poem. I always appreciate hearing this.☮️
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Hi Ali, this is a lovely interpretation of the prompt. I also take great delight in nature.
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Thank you for reading.☮️❤️
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I agree, extraordinary…and speaks so deep.
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Thank you for your kind words
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You’re most welcome.
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This poem is a mantra Ali. And lovely as well!
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Sigh ~~~ I know I could find solace in your box of green. Extraordinary write, Ali.
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Helen, I am glad you could find respite in these words.☮️
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A box for each matter makes so much sense… we sort in able to save, and maybe in one box we keep what we hope for.
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Life is all about sorting. Thanks for your thoughts.☮️
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Ali, I immediately connected to the colors of your boxes and their contents. The last stanza really speaks to me. This is a profound poem that touches my heart.
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Colleen, thank you so much for letting me know that my words touched your day. Wishing you wellness and peace.❤️
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Thanks so much, Ali. ❤️
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Love the compartmentalization! We all need these boxes to retreat to when the world gets too much to bear.
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Thank you for reflecting back what you heard in this poem.❤️☮️
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Such a wonderful poem, Ali. When the air around you feels heavy, when the world around you looks to be in turmoil, it’s important to find your sanctuary, to retreat into it so you can truly hear and listen to the voice of your soul. Thanks for sharing, and have a good day 🙂 Aiva xx
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Avia, I would like to add a box of tangerine skies for places I have traveled and have yet to go. Thank you for inspiring me to add this box.❤️☮️
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This is gorgeously encapsulated, Ali! I especially resonate with; “when the world becomes too loud for living I retreat to this sanctuary of survival.” 💖💖
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Thank you for reflecting back with spoke to you.❤️☮️
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beautiful
and needed
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I enjoyed the connection to trio of unique boxes. The first stanza I can relate to, one needs that sanctuary.
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Thank you for reflecting back how you experienced this poem. I truly appreciate it.
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The pure clarity of nature is superbly expressed in your beautiful poem Ali .. 💚🌲🌏
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Nature is a gift of peace and renewal. It is so easy to take it for granted.☮️
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No, never … every day I bask in her wondrous ways 😊🌏
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I like this interpretation of the prompt as mental/emotional compartmentalization.
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Thank you for sending this reflection back to me. It inspires me to write more based on this thought.☮️
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I like the nature colors being tied in with clarity.
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Thanks Melissa. This was a quick write but I enjoyed thinking of the boxes inside of me. I know the prompt called for one box but I am always going outside the lines.
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Beautiful, Ali. Thank you. 🙏🏻 💜
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Great to hear from you Carrie. Are you able to join in a writing circle this coming Saturday, 4/13 at 9:30 am? I would love to see you.
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Believing – gets us through. Well done.
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