
Somewhere near the produce
between the oranges and tumbling peppers
a song, Ed Sheeran is singing
and the tears arrive, as I listen.
(I don't usually cry in public but the emotion is undeniable.)
I am still as a river rock, while the shoppers flow around,
struck by hearing the words I couldn't hear before.
I let their message in
feeling what you were trying to say.
What I was unable to receive before.
I don't care that I am crying next to the bananas.
It feels so good to be loved by you.
© Ali Grimshaw 2024
“I don’t care that I am crying next to the bananas.” 🩷
I understand musical moments like this! When the universe is conveying a truth to you that makes you realise what someone meant – and you express this so eloquently. How lovely to catch up on your poems today! 🙂
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I imagined the song to be Supermarket Flower. It’s a great one:)
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I imagined the song was Supermarket Flower. It’s a great one:)
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I love that a song came to mind for you. I will look that one up and give it a listen.
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I don’t care that I am crying next to the bananas.
It feels so good to be loved by you.
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Thank you for reflecting back the lines that spoke to you. I always love hearing them.
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Oh, those moments are the best, but the hardest to endure. When we finally understand something, it can rock you to your core. Brava, Ali!
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Susi, thank you for receiving my message. I appreciate hearing from you.
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❤ Thank YOU, Ali!
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What a beautiful spot to find oneself in as a loving message surrounds you amid such colour, Ali!
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I guess it goes to show that the magic of love can occur anywhere if you are open to it.
Wishing you a wonderful day.
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Impressive ❤️
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Thank you for reading☮️
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Your poem is beautiful and touching (even more so because you cry beside the bananas 🍌) I love it!
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Such sweet emotion in this one.
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My sweet Ali made me stop cleaning up the kitchen after dinner tonight so that she could read this poem to me.
I am so lucky to be married to her!
The Ed Sheeran song is “Thinking Out Loud”.
Love is indeed the best of what we have.
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Songs touch our soul, no matter where 🥰
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That is a beautiful truth. Aren’t we lucky to have music.❤️
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Nice. 👍👍❤️❤️
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So honest and beautiful, Ali.
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Thank you, Michelle. I am climbing my way back to writing.☮️
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Hi there dear Ali, Hope you are enjoying your summer and life is treating you well. Looks like you are gallivanting. Please enjoy. Was wondering if you would be having any Writing Circles this summer. I miss my Ali fix! Please take care. HUGS! Fredda
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Fredda, thank you for your kind inquiry. It warms my heart to know you miss the writing circles. I had to take a break for some self-care. I’m hoping to get one scheduled soon. I would love to write with you again.
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Beautiful Ali 🩷🧡
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Love is always leading me forward. Thanks for reading.☮️
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Far too exquisite for words to express the emotions your words harvested from my heart … well done Ali … 🌏💕
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Love is the best part of living. It comes in so many forms. Your comment made my day.
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I’m glad … my pleasure Ali 😍📖
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