
Painted leaves sing in unison Unlike music, their song is soundless harmony. This orchestra of glow soothes the tempo of an internal pounding from a day of instruments that refused to play the same song. Fall catches you with muted volume a serenade of equilibrium let the blushing colors sing you home. © Alicia Grimshaw (rewrite of 2018 poem)
Fall catches you…
Such a wonderful serenade of a gentle season change. I love the imagery. There’s a sense of resounding calm that is just warm and fuzzy.
“Let blushing colors sing you home” Beautiful. One of your most soothing poetry.
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Shanyu,
Thank you for your kind words of support.
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My absolute pleasure Ali. I’m behind with my reading, but I’ll catch up soon. Cheers.
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May you find peace in your day.
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I hope you do too.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing. Wishing you wellness.
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Always happy to read and share your posts, My Dear!!
xoxo
😘💕🌹😁
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I appreciate your support.
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Hi Ali,
These verses resonated for me, and I quote,
“from a day of instruments
that refused to play
the same song”
Somewhere in the words, I see at once a glimpse of stubbornness and melancholy.
Shakti Ghosal
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Shakti,
Thank you for reflecting back the words that spoke to you in this poem. Somedays can feel loud and out of synch. Nature’s beauty always seems to be able to sing me back to center.
Wishing you wellness and peace.
Ali
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Absolutely brilliant photo and poem, beautiful as always.
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Thank you. I always appreciate hearing from people who find beauty in my words.
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My pleasure always!
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Wow, I absolutely love this! Such a unique take on such a such a common poetry topic. I felt what I have not even accumulated yet from this day about to unfold already being swept out and away from me by your poetic Autumn breeze. ❤
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Thank you for your kind words. Wishing you peace
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vividly
the words match
the photo
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Thank you for your kind words. I love this photo from last year.
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So beautiful, Ali. The Autumn is when I feel alive! It is a season I look forward to…with it’s beauty, and pace, as we begin the proceeds preparing for winter. The colors give us so much to enjoy as we prepare. I love how you make this process feel like a symphonic musical in my heart. Thank you. 🙏🏻🍁🍂
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Carrie, I greatly appreciate your reflection. I’m glad to hear we’re moving into a season that fills your heart with joy. I look forward to the trees turning to beautiful shades of red and peachy golden. This photo is from last year. Sending you love my friend
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“fall catches you with muted volume” had to read it out loud several times; beautifully stringed together, Ali 😊 Thanks for sharing and have a good day 😀 Aiva
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Thank you for reflecting back this line from the poem. I hope these words brought you comfort.
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Delightful poem Ali! Clever and evocative. Catch me if you can… 🙂
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Nature continues to provide renewal for all of us who wander under the trees.
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Yes, thankfully.
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let the blushing colors
sing you home.
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Thank you my friend. May we all find renewal in the fall colors.
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Beautiful! So much comfort in this phrase-<3
let the blushing colors
sing you home
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Glad to hear you found Comfort in my words. Take good care my friend.
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