I like this because the swirling of questions could be about one particular situation or many. It’s interesting to me when people are NOT inquisitive and don’t feel they need the answers. That is not me.
Questions about relationships are the ones that usually keep us awake at 4 A.M. Love how you convey their amassing all in a seemingly unending procession, Ali.
I love this piece, and the rhythm is so enjoyable. Very great flow. I have to say, these questions would keep me up at 4:00 am as well! It sounds very restless.
Those kinds of questions sure won’t help you get back to sleep! Our minds bounce questions like pinballs in a pinball machine, which is cool, just not in the middle of one’s sleep cycle!
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
Questions are great anytime but 4 AM— but alas that is when they are being asked.
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There is more to process right now than ever. Thanks for visiting.
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Asking the right questions is the beginning of everything. (K)
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Yes, it is the place to start.
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I like this because the swirling of questions could be about one particular situation or many. It’s interesting to me when people are NOT inquisitive and don’t feel they need the answers. That is not me.
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My favorite poems are those that can be interpreted in different ways. Glad to hear you have retained your inquisitiveness. Take care
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This is deeply philosophical! The poem has a whole can be interpreted on so many levels both personal and political. Love this 🙂
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Thank you for seeing the layers in this. Much appreciated.
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Questions about relationships are the ones that usually keep us awake at 4 A.M. Love how you convey their amassing all in a seemingly unending procession, Ali.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Dora. There is so much to ponder lately.
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I love questioning pieces Ali. Read fast and then reread it usually prompts MORE questions!
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We share a love for questions. I think that is why I always enjoy your writing. Have a great weekend. Take care.
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Thank you Ali ! 🙂
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Oh, those tormented 4 a.m. thoughts! Encapsulated perfectly in this poem 😊
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Our minds have more to process than ever. Writing is what helps keep me sane and grounded. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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I love this piece, and the rhythm is so enjoyable. Very great flow. I have to say, these questions would keep me up at 4:00 am as well! It sounds very restless.
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Lucy,
I greatly appreciate your feedback. I am a lover of questions even if they wake me up sometimes.
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What are the rules in play?
Are you even in the race?
Do you want to be?
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Thank you for reflecting back my friend. As usual I have more questions than answers.
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So many questions, it seems never ending!
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Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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early bird
from paper boy
days
rise and shine!
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How wonderful to receive your poem in response.
Embracing what shows up is always the way to go.
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my pleasure . the treasure is to measure meself with other s words and build a chain. mainly.
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Why is it that the brain rakes up such deep thoughts at a time when you’re supposed to be fast asleep? Nice poem though😀
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts. It sounds like you could relate.
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Unfortunately yes. Been awake at odd hours with such weird thoughts coming up.
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You are not alone.
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*photo
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That phot and your poem – very interesting
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The photo is from an art museum in Amsterdam. The eyes are actually benches for people to sit on inside the museum.
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Ah thank you! 🙂
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I can tell you’re a curious person I am too.
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Those kinds of questions sure won’t help you get back to sleep! Our minds bounce questions like pinballs in a pinball machine, which is cool, just not in the middle of one’s sleep cycle!
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Yes, it’s wonderful to have a creative brain and sometimes inconvenient when it wants to think at off hours. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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