at either end of night
there is an opening to light
between, "Good Morning"
and the next curtaining of eyes
there is an opening
between what remains on the list
the permanently written yet unresolved
and the one who holds the pen
there is an opening
without a defined doorway
that resides within all light
a heartspace without walls
it lies in the pause before the next
twilight of the in between
rubythroat mellowing to nectarine
©Ali Grimshaw 2021
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Wow! That is so beautiful!💛
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Thank you for your kind response.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing.
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! xoxox 😘💕🎁🌹
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A painting with words (and that image) reminding me of Georgie O’Keefe
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Flowers or a daily inspiration. Thanks for reading
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This is beautiful ❤❤
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Shreya,
I am gladdened to hear that my words brought beauty to your day. Thanks for reading.
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This is a beautiful poem, Ali!
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I appreciate your kind response. Make it a great day
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Most welcome and have a great weekend!
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it lies in the pause before the next
twilight of the in between
rubythroat mellowing to nectarine
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This seems to be the most loved stanza. Thank you for sharing.❤️
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Your words speak of gentle possibility in all things. Beautifully written Ali 🧡
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Thank you. It makes my heart happy to bring possibility forth in my poetry and send it out to the world.
Wishing you all good things.
Ali
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I really do like your thoughts in this one Ali! Just beautiful and thought provoking! Light on both ends of night… such a great line!
Dwight
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Thank you for your feedback, Dwight. I really appreciate hearing what spoke to you most from this poem.
Make it a great day.
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Thank you and you are welcome!
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Oh my heart this is absolutely beautiful, Ali! Especially moved by; “there is an opening without a defined doorway that resides within all light a heartspace without walls.” Wow!! 💝💝
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Sanaa,
Getting a “wow” from you makes my day. Thanks for your kind feedback. I hope my words brought lift to your day. That is my intention.
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A lovely poem – and aren’t the openings where all the good stuff steals in, the glimpses of divinity? I especially love:
“it lies in the pause before the next
twilight of the in between
rubythroat mellowing to nectarine”
❤
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Thank you so much for your reflection. May you find beauty in your day
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Thank you 😊 You too ☀️
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Absolutely beautiful 🌹
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So beautiful!
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Thank you, Lucy.
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This is beautiful, Ali. 💕
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Thank you for your positive response. Much appreciated.
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My pleasure 😊
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“twilight of the in between
rubythroat mellowing to nectarine”
Stunning.
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Thank you for reflecting back the words that most spoke to you. Much appreciated.
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this is beautiful, and i like the mysterious electricity you create in the in-between places… very well written
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Phillip,
Thank you for your feedback. It makes me happy to hear that you experienced mystery in my words.
Have a great day.
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Beautiful. Textures and images to bask in. Thank you.
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Carrie,
I am glad to hear this poem reached you today. There is so much possibility in the in between.
I hope you tending to your beautiful heart.
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