
she wished to glue leaves of color back onto the limbs unprepared for this season's shift then frozen morning winds carried a new consideration her way could a breathe of chill be welcomed like an unexpected guest a dabbled hope through dark days? she tries this thought on, not her usual fashion, seeks to understand it's fittings then opens her dormant suitcase to laughter spilling out like sunshine a reminder of past orbits around the sun she has another day of changing sky and many clouds to capture
© Ali Grimshaw 2022
Moonwashed Musings – Dappled
These lines remind me that many times when situations change, perhaps for the worse, we have a choice to rise above and still find adventure. Lovely, Ali!
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Susi,
Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I always appreciate hearing from you. I am home sick today and your message lifted my spirits. Wishing you wellness and peace,
Ali
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Awww, thanks Ali, glad it did! Thanks for the wishes, may you experience the same. ❤
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Being able to write a good poem is an art form and it’s what you did splendidly, Ali 🙂 Thanks for sharing and have a good day 🙂 Aiva xx
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I so appreciate your kind response. Wishing you wellness.
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Wow! Brilliant lines, Ali. I love “she tries this thought on, not her usual
fashion, seeks to understand it’s fittings” Outstanding piece and thank you for joining in.
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Thank you for the kind words and the reflecting back of lines that spoke to you. I enjoyed reading many of the writings shared on your site this week.
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You’re welcome and thank you, Ali.
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One of your best, Ali.
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Wow. I wouldn’t have guessed this. Thanks so much for your feedback. It is much appreciated. I am curious. What made this poem stand out for you? Or what did you hear in it that spoke to you?
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“could a breathe of chill be welcomed
like an unexpected guest
a dabbled hope through dark days?”
I immediately thought “yes!”
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It makes my heart happy to hear your answer. Thank you for reflecting back to me. It gives me hope.☮️
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You’re welcome Ali 🙂
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I just your book, The Yellow Door, in the mail. I look forward to reading it.
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Oh I hope you like it Ali ! (I try to tell everyone, if you ordered from Amazon and receive the copy WITHOUT the black banner at the bottom it is an unedited version that I can’t get them to stop selling! The story is the same, it is just not edited).
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No, I ordered it from a link you have on your website.👍🏾
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Thank you Ali 🙂
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then frozen morning winds carried
a new consideration her way…
…opens her dormant suitcase
to laughter spilling out like sunshine
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Thank you for reflecting back these lines. Your response has me reflecting on what might be dormant versus lost. ☮️
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How blessed you are that you can still receive all this beauty, undamaged by the awfulness our species is struggling through right now. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for appreciating what I have shared. ☮️
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Oh I could use a suitcase full of laughter these days – or even a thimbleful. Fine work, AG. Thanks.
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I have been watching some comedy shows on Netflix. If you dig through your closet and don’t find a suitcase of laughter, maybe you could at least try that.??
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“… opens her dormant suitcase
to laughter spilling out like sunshine
a reminder of past orbits around the sun”
We should all be so lucky to have much laughter spilling forth into our days 😀
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Jules,
Thank you for reflecting back the lines that spoke to you.
Our happy memories can help buoy us in times of dark days.
Wishing you all good things.
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✨💖
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Beautiful, Ali. The last three lines are my favorite.
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Jeff,
Thanks for taking the time to reflect back to me. Today I am grateful for another day and the forever changing sky that comes with it.
Peace to you,
Ali
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You’re most welcome, Ali. Thank you. Peace to you too.
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