"Could you write a poem for me?" you asked. Then you left before I could ask the specifics of your heart's desire. Are you in need of savory words to awaken or creamy expressions to nourish? I pondered for hours then did what I could based on the circumstances. I wrote out a mixed assortment of sizes; courageous squares of coconut, rounds of morning lips delight, cinnamon memories of warm skin and the encouragement of toffee. This sampler will be delivered to your doorstep tomorrow at 4:00 pm. Let me know which flavor left your heart wanting more.
neverending waves
love's ocean unstoppable
I am your shoreline
© Ali Grimshaw 2023
Haibun Monday 1-30-23: Heart
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Photo taken in Portugal, 2017.
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Lovely, Ali!
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Thank you. Make it a great day.
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It was, and you’re welcome! 🙂
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love’s ocean unstoppable
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Thank you, friend. I always appreciate receiving your reflection.
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Wonderful, Ali. I could feel each sensation.
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Jeff,
Thank you for the kind words. Wishing you wellness.
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Wonderfully done, Ali. A short poem, leaving you wanting for more. Hope you are doing well 🙂
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Lovely verse Ali. Will this be your Valentine’s treat for someone?
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Brad, yes, indeed. I have always loved Valentine’s Day.
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Beautifully written and illustrated 💖
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Thank you for your kind words. Wishing you a wonderful day.
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Love this 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words
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You are welcome 🙂
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I think such a scrumptious sampler will be appreciated.
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It’s hard to lose when you’re giving with your whole heart
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Your haibun is lovely. I like the sampler of taste’s delights!
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Thanks for sharing your feedback. This was a fun one to write.
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You’re welcome, Ali. This was a fun read.
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Nice
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that’s so gorgeous Ali! ❤️
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Thanks for your positive response. I’m getting ready for the month of love.
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you’re so welcome. oh that’s so lovely ALI! I BEST Jump on board! 💗
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Very nicely done, Ali.
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Thank you. Make it a great day.
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Yes, and you do the same! Thanks.
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Sweet 🙂
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Superb write! Actually, quite delicious too.
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Thank you for letting me know that my words touched you today.
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Love this.
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Glad to hear you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by.
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Always a pleasure!
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I love short poems as they get us where we’re going quickly, and because there’s no room for meandering, every word weighs a ton. Thanks for sharing and have a good day 🙂 Aiva xx
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I agree. Thanks for the compliment. I am honored by your visits here.
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🥰🥰🥰
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I love this poem and the picture is exquisite – Portugal is somewhere I’d love to visit
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Thanks, Beth. Portugal is a wonderful country to visit. I definitely recommend it.
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