
“Take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away, but
do not take from me your laughter.” – Pablo Neruda
Like rain on wildfire
I am quenched by your voice.
I hadn't realized my shrunkenness
my dehydrated heart in wait.
Your laugh rippled across the crowd.
I could feel your presence of lightness in its cadence.
It is all the more precious to hear
knowing that life isn't easy for you.
Your laughter is like a defiant call
of the joy riding alongside the grief.
I feel it in my dancing bones
as I twirl toward your part of the floor.
© Ali Grimshaw 2024
This poem is dedicated to my friend, Valerie. Her laugh is steadfast and generous. It always makes my heart smile. Whose laugh lights up your day? I hope you will let them know.
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Life is short,
love big.
Ali
“Like rain on wildfire
I am quenched by your voice.
I hadn’t realized my shrunkenness
my dehydrated heart in wait.”
“It is all the more precious to hear
knowing that life isn’t easy for you.”
These lines resonated with me the most. I hope she read your beautiful heartwarming poem 🩷
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Thank you. She loved the poem.
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Beautiful dedication to your friend, Ali! I also enjoy the laughter of my friends. 🙂
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Susi, laughing with friends is definitely one of the best parts of life.
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Indeed! 🙂
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Ali, this is a beautiful piece of dedication to your dear friend. I wish her good days ahead so you spend years of laughter together.
By the way, I am most amazed by my mom’s laughter. She is the one I love most on this planet.😇😇
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Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. How wonderful that you treasure your mother’s laughter that way.❤️
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Thanks for the compliment, Ali💫💫
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Your laughter is like a defiant call
of the joy riding alongside the grief.
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Thank you for reflecting back.
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This is such a wonderfully heartwarming poem, Ali! I especially love; “Your laughter is like a defiant call of the joy riding alongside the grief.” 😍
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Thank you for reflecting back. The word has spoke to you. Much appreciated.☮️
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This poem is beautiful — and such a delight to read ❤️
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Lesley, thank you for letting me know that these words reached you today. Wishing you all good things.
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Thanks, Ali, And to you likewise 🩷
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Oh, I love this! “I could feel your presence of lightness” is beautiful.❤️
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Great to hear from you, Melissa. I hope you have laughter in your day.
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What a joyful tribute to your friend!
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Beautiful tribute to your friend. Nice write. 🙂
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Thank you for stopping by. ☮️
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You are welcome. 🙂
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What a beautiful tribute this is to a dear friend. I especially love your description of her laughter here…
“like a defiant call
of the joy riding alongside the grief.”
A strong woman she must be.
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Yes she is.
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Laughter is our medicine! Beautiful Ali 🥰🌈🥰
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So true. Thank goodness for people who remind me of this. Wishing you a marvelous day.
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A friend with such a laughter must be the best… wish I could be one.
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Bjorn, thanks for stopping by. Each of us has gifts to give.
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wonderful poem
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Thank you, Beth. I appreciate your kind words.
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Beautiful poem to your friend, Ali.
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Thank you, Michelle. Wishing you a beautiful beautiful day.
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A wonderful acknowledgement, Ali.
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I hope this inspires others to share their appreciation for the big and small ways friendship gives to our days❤️
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What a beautiful tribute.💖
~karyn
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Thank you friend. Laughing with others is so healing and joyous. I’m glad I have that with you.❤️
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I LOVE this Ali! The poem and the picture of Valerie…so beautiful! You’re right about her laughter! 💜
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It felt so good to write this today. I am glad that you know her laughter.
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