
“We have an inner window through which we can see the world, and though it gets cloudy in life, it’s our job to wipe it clean and see things as they really are.” – Sebastian Koch
It is the season of contemplation
a time of wanting to flee while knowing stillness is the way forward.
I am seeking windows of all sizes
expansive with weatherproof panes, outlooks rippled with time.
Views to heal my confusion between rain and questions.
A skylight to observe the assurance of passing moon.
As the headlines continue to scream, I find another window holding
steadiness of trunks wide and wise from centuries, leaves of rainshine.
Curtains of my imagination sway with a peaceful breeze.
There is another way, another view, a possibility of love yet found.
I unshutter pain to let the air in.
© Ali Grimshaw 2025
The seed of this poem came from a prompt on dVerse Poets Pub and this inspiring view from a cabin in Oregon. Every time I return to this photo it settles me.
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I love “I unshutter pain to let the air in” — it feels like healing through honesty.
~David
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Thank you for reflecting that line back to me. Your timing is perfect. I am writing through pain with the belief that healing is on the other side.
Wishing you wellness and peace,
Ali
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Yes, that beautiful view is calming. And I love the poem.
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Those views from those windows as you describe them made me feel such contemplative calm. That last line is superb, Ali.
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I am glad to bring calm to the world anytime I can.
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Nothing steadies more than the sight of a tree trunk Beautiful poem and I love the line “Curtains of my imagination sway with a peaceful breeze”
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Marja,
I agree about the steadfastness of trees. What a gift a strong trunk can be.
I appreciate that you sent back the line that most spoke to you.
Wishing you wellness,
Ali
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We all need a place to escape life’s chaos. Wonderful poem.
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I appreciate your kind response. Nature is always ready to provide us with an escape.
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I feel that same peace and comfort when I’m laying on the beach staring out at the ocean. Beautiful, Ali!
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It’s so important to find a place to rest and keep our hearts alive. Thanks for stopping by.
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So true! Happy to, Ali! 🙂
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Beautiful writing. Absolutely love the last line. When we feel pain and surrender to it, we get close on understanding where it comes from. As the season changes, I think it’s a great time for reflection – how far have we come and where have we grown, and where else can we grow… We are in Spring here in Australia, getting warmer and so inviting to spend more time outside. Wishing you a wonderful autumn and winter ahead, Ali 🙂
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Mabel,
How generous your response is in thoughtfulness and care!
Transitions between seasons are an invitation to reflect. It is far too easy to go rushing into the next without taking time to celebrate and learn from our actions.
I am jealous that you are heading into spring. I love seeing the new green.
Be well and may joy find you today,
Ali
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You said it well, Ali. Slowing down is where we often encounter realisations and find inspiration. Perhaps you will have a cozy one this autumn and winter, one of reading, writing and creativity. Sending you sunshine, joy and love, Ali 💕
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What lovely words to read on the last day of October with rain falling gently against the windows, Ali.
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Thank you for your appreciation.
Wishing you wellness.
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Thank you so much!
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Such a beautiful, meditative write, Ali. The closing lines are especially so lovely. Thank you for sharing it.
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My intention is to return to active hope, and it came through in this poem. I hope it brought a lift to your day.
Thanks for leaving me a message.
Ali
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This is the type of window we all need, and we have to let the air in.
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Thank you for reflecting back in a supportive way. Much appreciated.
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So beautiful…
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Thank you for stopping by.
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Dearest Ali, I have read this several times already and it’s stunning. I tried to find one part that most resonates, and I keep finding yet another then another then another that speaks so gorgeously from your heart in this generous sharing. What a gift you are to the world my friend. Thank you for continuing to show up exactly as you are and to share your heart. I love you♥️ ~Kirsten *Be well. Do Good. Shine Bright. *
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Thank you for spending time with my words. It touches my heart to read what you received from them.
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I love your season of contemplation, Ali, the image you chose to illustrate it, a lovely combination of prompts, and the quotation from Sebastian Koch/ Your poem has so many lovely lines, and these jumped out at me especially:
‘I am seeking windows of all sizes
expansive with weatherproof panes, outlooks rippled with time’
and
‘I unshutter pain to let the air in.’
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Kim,
Thank you for reading my words and taking the time to send the lines that spoke to you back to me.
I have been in deep reflection and it felt good to put this into words.
Wishing you wellness.
Ali
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My pleasure, Ali, and thank you.
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A lovely calm poem and gosh the way it closes is beautiful.
I love these lines…
Curtains of my imagination sway with a peaceful breeze.There is another way, another view, a possibility of love yet found.
I unshutter pain to let the air in.
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Thank you for reflecting back the lines that spoke to you. I truly appreciate it.
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To see and nurture this inner landscape within is a practice and a gift! Your picture and your beautiful words honour this quiet sacred space Ali. 🌿☘️🍀🐦🔥
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Karen, thank you so much for your reflection. It means a lot to hear from you.
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“Such a beautiful and profound quote. The metaphor of the inner window truly captures the need for self-awareness and constant contemplation. The image is the perfect frame for this quiet wisdom.”
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Thank you.
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