
And the rhythm continues, yellow round, orange round, red
tiny parts of bright aliveness making up the whole.
Are the boundaries holding us together or separating us by hue?
Each is playing a part in the view.
One beside the other,
next two, in front of, beside. Are we leaning unequally
or holding each other up?
How far would we need to back up
before seeing the whole picture? Remember up close
never looks the same as from across the room.
Squint your eyes a little. Now look again.
Notice how the colors grow toward midnight as it meets in the center.
Could this be a reminder to see darkness as a place to rest
maybe even a place of beauty
instead of fighting our way to where we think we belong?
© Ali Grimshaw 2024
You are invited to dVerse Poets’ Pub to write something beautiful in response to this artwork by Alma Thomas, The Eclipse (1970). Join in the fun HERE. Thank you, Melissa, for getting me writing today. It felt like releasing a big sigh and the air returned to fill my lungs without effort.





tended affectionately
organic prizes plumped
primed by summer's passion
heat and BB King's blues
quenching warmth
gathering of sunlit kisses
red ripe to tango
with your tongue and mine
slip into my backyard
delight in this tender flesh
this ready to please moment
of this temporary season.
© Ali Grimshaw 2020 (rewrite from 2018)

