You are a blue sky.
A color that I love to get lost in.
A consistent and ever-changing
backdrop for others,
and stand alone marvel.
Sometimes filled with challenging clouds
opening my eyes
to visions of blue
I’ve not seen.
© Ali Grimshaw
You are a blue sky.
A color that I love to get lost in.
A consistent and ever-changing
backdrop for others,
and stand alone marvel.
Sometimes filled with challenging clouds
opening my eyes
to visions of blue
I’ve not seen.
© Ali Grimshaw
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
:Nice! To go along with “a consistent and ever-changing backdrop…”, I’d suggest changing the last line to, “I’ve not yet seen.” I think that one additional word might help impart the acceptance and even embracing of the subtle changes in another.
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Thank you for your reflection.
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A consistent and ever-changing
backdrop for others,
and stand alone marvel.
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Beautiful
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Thank you for your kind response.
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