Reflection

You are a blue sky.

A color that I love to get lost in.

A consistent and ever-changing

backdrop for others,

and stand alone marvel.

Sometimes filled with challenging clouds

opening my eyes

to visions of blue

I’ve not seen.

© Ali Grimshaw

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5 thoughts on “Reflection

  1. :Nice! To go along with “a consistent and ever-changing backdrop…”, I’d suggest changing the last line to, “I’ve not yet seen.” I think that one additional word might help impart the acceptance and even embracing of the subtle changes in another.

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