
“What we carry defines who we are. And the effort we make is our legacy.” ~Mitch Albom
I carry your laugh. How it starts small, a rolling whisper then snowballs to a full round of roaring joy. I carry your hands. How your fingers thread mine snug and loose at the same time woven. I carry your story memories holding me gently close while always leaving breathing room growth space for my expansion. ©Ali Grimshaw 2022 Join a welcoming community of poets at dVerse Open Link Night #321 - HERE.
on a first read, I found the Mitch Alborn quote to be very “heavy” – I found your poem altogether a lovleier, lighter offering. Now I am inviting myself to carry my “stuff” more lightly, more kindly – to leave a gentler legacy.
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I appreciate your honest reflection. I find your intention to “carry my “stuff” more lightly, more kindly” to be a wonderful act of self-care. I write to give and I appreciate that you received something of value here. Be kind to yourself.
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Thank you for your generosity and for your offerings.
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Just so beautiful, Ali.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.☮️
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Beautiful, Ali. I always find something beautiful here when I visit.
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Sunra, thank you for your kind response. Isn’t it wonderful how others words can touch our day. I feel the same way about many poems I read.
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You’re most welcome ☀️ And yes I agree!
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Such cherished memories to have of a loved one, Ali.
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Thank you for spending time with my words today.☮️
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My pleasure, Ali ❤
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So beautiful Ali 💐🙏🏼💖
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Thank you, Val. I’m looking forward to writing with you soon. Take good care of your beautiful heart.
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Thank you Ali. Take good care of yours too 💕
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‘ a rolling whisper ‘ – I very much love the sound of it, such a beautiful poem, Ali 🙂
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I’m glad you found my words beautiful. That makes me happy.
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I like the repetition and format of this piece. The words speak volumes, so tenderly.
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Thank you for this reflection and for hosting on Open Link Night. I so appreciate the dVerse community.
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A beautiful poem of inheritance–the extraordinary ordinary that makes us us.
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What a great comment!❤️
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You’re welcome! 💙
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The image of the fingers threaded together, but loose, makes me think of God, actually! He holds us but allows us free will. And the expansion at the end is what it’s all about. Love it! 💓
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Thank you for sharing how this poem landed for you. I am always fascinated how others experience my poems. You have offered another layer.
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My pleasure, Ali! 💖
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Beautiful poem. Flows very well too. Tender and soft in its cadence.
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Thank you kindly☮️
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Absolutely beautiful Ali. I know it is called inherited, but it made me think of my husband, who has been gone for almost 6 years.
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Carla,
I believe we can inherit from anyone who we have loved. It is the best in life to be touched by and held in love by another. Thank you for sharing with me. I am so honored that this poem made you think of him.
Sending you a heartfelt hug.
Ali
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A gorgeous write Ali
Much💚love
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Gillena,
Thank you for stopping by and taking time with my words. Wishing you all good things.
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