Will you?
Fall, drift, yield
hand in hand,
warm kiss of palms,
veins of life intertwined,
before we,
plunge through crispness
to the other side
of golden.
© Alicia Grimshaw 2017
Will you?
Fall, drift, yield
hand in hand,
warm kiss of palms,
veins of life intertwined,
before we,
plunge through crispness
to the other side
of golden.
© Alicia Grimshaw 2017
flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw 
Love the journey we will go through… maybe we need more of such optimism before we have to use candles not to succumb
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Thank you for your reflection Bjorn.
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Now that’s a rather nice analogy. I like to think one day when living ceases to be fun I can fall “through crispness to the other side of golden.” Nice thought is it not?
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Beverly, I agree. Effortlessly joyful.
Enjoy your day.
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If only it had permanence. You’ve captured that feeling of transition that is my favorite season.
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Thanks for letting me know you could relate to this poem. Have a great day
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Nice way of putting it: “the other side
of golden”
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Thank you Frank
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Lovely! Falling to the other side of golden. You make it sound like a good place to be.
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Thanks Jane. I appreciate your kind words.
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Your words are beautiful 🙂
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all the sounds, and feels of autumn in such simple beauty
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Thank you. I love the feel of autumn.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you.
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So beautiful image and also lines.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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veins of life intertwined
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Thank you.
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Absolutely loving your Autumn writings, and your beautiful ability to interweave your words between Autumn and our own human emotions, simply exquisite…..
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Thank you Ivor. That means a lot. I enjoy your poems as well.
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Incredible image!
The sentiment is inspiring! 😊
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I aim to spread joy with this one. Glad you liked it.
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yes, bring it on )
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Indeed. Enjoy it to the fullest.
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What a lovely invitation…autumn is like walking into a painting!
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Agreed. Bring on the colors.
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Yes!
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