Thank you to Amethyst Review for sharing my poem, Threads. If you are a poetry lover please give this site a visit.
Threads
I am
just one
frayed
wound tight
coarsely made
tested by force
twisted resiliency
bound to others
strained with weight
threatened by blades
mended from attention
unequally created companion
equally essential thread
of the human fabric
crafted with care
weakened by wear
the loss of one
compromises
the whole
tapestry
to tear.
Ali Grimshaw is the author of Flashlight Batteries, https://flashlightbatteries.blog/ a poetry blog for those struggling in darkness and tough times. Her poems have been published in Vita Brevis, Poetry Breakfast and Ghost City Review.
“My heart wide open
like a prairie to the sky”
You have a wonderful poetic gift.
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Thanks for your reflection Don. Much appreciated.
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This is beautiful
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Jason, thanks for letting me know that you saw beauty in my words.
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Thanks for following 😁
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Brilliantly constructed poem, one that is profoundly deep. Thank you!
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AmyRose,
Thank you for reading and letting me know my words touched your day.
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You are quite welcome, Ali. 🦋
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So beautiful – and I particularly loved this form of poetry!
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Thank you for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.
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Beautiful words Ali. We’re all intertwined aren’t we? 💙
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Yes. Each one of us an essential thread. Have a beautiful day.
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You too Ali
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Profound and deep poetic words of Reality and Wisdom, Ali. Lovely.
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Thank you for your positive response.
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Welcome Ali
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